Monday, March 20, 2023

Hamlet; the Noir Adaption 2023 Act 2 Scene 2 Sub Scene 9

 Act Two

Act Two Scene Two

Sub Scene Nine

The play runneth

The players discarded their luggage and stood to form a semi-circle which then the main player stepped forth. He stood there with his right arm extended out as he was holding a sword.

“Anon, he finds him striking too short at Greeks. His antique sword, rebellious to his arm, lies where it falls, repugnant to command.” The player swung his arm but struck nothing with it. He then stepped up to a chair near him.

“Unequal matched, Pyrrhus at Priam drives, in rage strikes wide,” The player still missed the chair with his strike, but he kicks it over with his right leg. It fell sideways to mimic that the force of the swing by the arm could have moved it.

“With the whiff and wind of his fell sword th’ unnervèd father falls.” Another player rushed forth to lie by the toppled chair with the hands raised to deflect any blows on his face.

“Then senseless Ilium, seeming to feel this blow, with flaming top, stoops to his base, and with a hideous crash takes prisoner Pyrrhus’ ear.” The second player called out in pain and had his hands over his ears.

“For lo, his sword, which was declining on the milky head of reverend Priam, seemed i’ th’ air to stick. So as a painted tyrant Pyrrhus stood and, like a neutral to his will and matter, did nothing.” The main player had stood over the fallen player, hesitant in his next move. His arm holding the sword fell to his side.

“But as we often see against some storm a silence in the heavens, the rack stands still, the bold winds speechless, and the orb below as hush as death, anon the dreadful thunder doth rend the region; so, after Pyrrhus’ pause, arousèd vengeance sets him new a-work” The main player shaken out of his stupor raised his arm and then swung it down at the fallen player.

“And never did the Cyclops’ hammers fall on Mars’s armor, forged for proof eternal, with less remorse than Pyrrhus’ bleeding sword now falls on Priam.” The other players at the semi-circle hummed a tone that was low yet surrounding to be heard by all.

“Out, out, thou strumpet Fortune! All you gods In general synod take away her power, break all the spokes and fellies from her wheel, And bowl the round nave down the hill of heaven as low as to the fiends!” A female player steps out from the line of players at the semi-circle to call out as if she was talking to the Gods.

“Be firm, be focused, let's not the whims of strumpet once again strike uncertainty to what was fated.” The other players echoed. “The lady of fortune, the bane of certainty gives way most times in the act, thus the action will be dulled to its true reaction.”

“Struck thee and delay not.” The players all got together in the semi-circle and sang together.

“Bravo but too long an act.” Polonius praised the acting and script.

“It shall to the barber’s with your beard.” Hamlet snapped in to say that the beard on Polonius was long and thick, and to get it done with, even the barber will lament the long cut it will take.

“Prithee says. He’s for a jig or a tale of bawdry, or he sleeps.” Hamlet added to insult the other that he knew no real tragedies to relate to, but bawdy taste perhaps in his write or he will fall aside.”

“Say on; come to Hecuba.” Hamlet prompts the players.

“Hecuba?” Polonius was baffled. “Why her?”

“She is Priam’s lover and listens to thee.” Hamlet hushed his explanation to Polonius. The female player ran forth and collapsed by the toppled chair. She was barefooted and held out her arms to the chair as if to place it right.

The main player took his turn as he approached the female player.

“Run barefoot up and down, threatening the flames with bisson rheum, clout upon that head
Where late the diadem stood, and for a robe, about her lank and all o’erteemèd loins a blanket, in the alarm of fear caught up— who this had seen, with tongue in venom steeped, against Fortune’s state would treason have pronounced?”

It was the state of a lady who had felt the losses in her life; her dignity, her child borne by her, her fate hung in the losing end as if she was treacherously bestowed.

“But if the gods themselves did see her then when she saw Pyrrhus make malicious sport in mincing with his sword her husband’s limbs, the instant burst of clamor that she made”, The main player stood over the chair and mimicked the killing once more.

“Unless things mortal move them not at all, only the Gods will know if they are to look. .” The other players in the semi-circle bemoaned with them facing away from each other as society does in them.

“Does when they chose not to see or hear. as  would have made milch the burning eyes of heaven.” Hamlet cut in on the play. “And passion in the gods if any does exist.”

“Encore!” Hamlet called out. “I loved all of you. Your tempestuous acts lay the words to those who are with sight. I am moved once more.”

Tears have appeared on Hamlet and he wipes them off with his fingers watching them flow down his fingers.

“If only I was moved then, but my flows were stifled.” Hamlet sighed in himself.

 

 


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