Sunday, October 30, 2016

Arthur; the New Legend and Myth Chapter O & 1

Jimmy Loong
May 7th 2016
the tale on a legend.




Part I
The first knights.
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The solitary fisherman in the rounded floating contraption was oval in shape alike to a half shell. The framework was of interwoven willow rods tied to the bark. The outer layer of the contraption was an animal skin covered with a layer of tar. The fisherman rowed the contraption which bottom was only mere inches below and appeared bobbing instead sailing on the water. The fisherman somehow managed to steer the contraption later to be known as the coracle used then off the coasts of Wales. The fisherman rowed on with the small paddle and reached the spot which marked his fish trap. It was a fish weir; a series of sticks and stones to form a V shape trap in the shallow end where the fishes once swam in will be trapped there with the narrow V opening. He reached into the water to test the stakes there.
“It’s still there.” The fisherman muttered to himself. He looked to the right and saw the high cliffs there. It was a steady formation and he had always thought of building his home there on the edge. It will be his grand home overlooking the inlet here. He envisaged himself standing on the edge looking out to the sea by the stacked woods. Once he seen those plunderers he will light up the signal there by burning the stacked woods. The village two mile inland will have adequate time to pack and leave for the nearby hills. It may arouse the sentries at the old castle at about three miles the other direction but he doubt the Lord there will spare any of his staff to help the village. The old sod is useless like the old battlements; for show and not of any other use. By then he would had run for the sea caves and hid there. It was all so simple but nothing was ever simple then. Well for one, the fishes ain’t biting that season. It must be the sea or the plunderers. They have come from across the sea and took what they want. It does not matter what as long its’ of value to them. There were over three hundred of the villagers then with a hundred able bodied men but with the relentless attacks, they have halves in the numbers with about twenty able bodied men remaining. The fought the earlier battles but each time they lost, they lose a dozen more men. It was a stupid move to fight against them. They learned to run soon after. Maybe the fishes knew that too and avoided the inlet.
The fisherman rowed the contraption to the side and then docked there. He climbed out and looked to the skies. It won’t rain that day from his reckoning but he was wrong on many occasions. He grabbed his empty basket and walked back to the village. He hoped his friends have better luck than him. While he was to take the path back his instinct told him to look behind. He did and saw the fleet there. He dropped the basket and ran. He has a head start but he wished he had both legs to run on. His left leg was maimed at the knee and he had the assistance of the wooden stick which was his paddle. He hobbled on while calling out at the top of his voice. He needed to do that to warn the others. All then in his mind was this thought.
“It was too early in the season and they kept on coming back much earlier. It had to stop.”

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Aron Bedyr stared at the earthen jug that was used to serve the toxic drink he had drunk half of it. He had not tasted anything then for his parched throat wanted was something to wet it. He had stood there for hours on the square with the dozen others waiting for the ceremony to be over then. It was his final servitude as the Centurion to the ever mighty Roman Empire.  He had stood there in his full armor and weapons to listen to the Senator there complete his speech on the empire. The later had the luxury of standing beneath the cotton canopy but not the faithful Roman finest. They were lined up like the offerings at the slave market except this line up was at the end of their service then. They were soon to be citizens of the Rome Empire.
Fifteen years he had served the Empire. He was Aron the Mad or to his friends then, Arthur. He joined as a young recruit to be given the distinct citizenship of the Empire and a piece of land for his service on the end of it. He had joined with three of his friends but only he had remained alive for the final ceremony. Both his friends, Uru and Dunt died during training. During those training days, there were the harsh sessions of training with the brutal beatings by the trainers. Above all, they were Welsh and never liked by the others, for they stood together. They were at it then during meals and in fights. They trained harder and it was then he lost his first friend who lost his life during a mock fight. Their opponents were rival Roman trainees which just arrived then. It was a grueling day of marching and then the ring side fight with knuckles.
Uru got cornered by two of the Romans while the others were preoccupied with the odds of eight against five. Two picked on Uri and was decimating him with punches. Aron saw the punched up but he was having the clubbing of his own opponent. He landed the right fist in a closed punch at the Roman’s midriff and followed up with a left handed fist into the right shoulder. The second punch raised the Roman face for a direct right fist into it. That fixed the Roman and Aron turned to his friend. He saw Uru dropped to his knees and was chopped by the standing Roman. The Roman was then laying kicks on the fallen Uru. Aron tried to assist but he was intercepted by his opponent who had recovered. The Roman dropped him with a body slam and both went down. Aron pushed his arms inside the struggle and jabbed his right fingers into the Roman’s eyes. With the Roman crying out in pain, Aron managed to kick free and then used his fists to clobber the Roman. He rolled over and turned to look at Uru but the other was flat on the ground. He was trampled by the two Romans. By then the training was called off but Uru died from his wounds. Nothing was done for him as he was Welsh. Dunt died just before the final training. He was found with the gladius wound on his back at the barracks.
Then there was only Aron and he made it to the battlefields where he fought from the Gaul to the Picts. It mattered not who they are but once the order was given, he will march to kill them all. He had the use of the pilus; the long handled spear or the gladius, his trusted blade. He will thrust or slash where needed and deflect with his shield. He will slam his body against the other and hope to draw first blood or die trying. Death evaded him somehow although the wounds were aplenty. He was told that in battle, ‘you do not feel the pain until it’s was over. Once you have lowered the shield or pulled the embedded gladius, then you will feel it all. The spurting blood for the cuts and the second wave of numbness stepped in. You will turn and walk to the line before collapsing there. Most times, you can’t remember much after that except to be ready for the next call of battle.’
“Hey, Arthur.” The one who spoke was another Centurion. His name was Jules Carna but everyone who knew him hailed him as Julius. “We are going to miss you.”
Arthur looked at the man who called him. Julius was a tall German who had pledged his life to the Empire. He was one year short of the long awaited rewards. He was clean shaven at the top but his parts of the body were covered with hair. He once boasted that he was probably a werewolf when it comes to the full moon. He placed his mug on the table which Arthur had taken for himself. Then he placed the Centurion helmet next to it. The sideway horse crest design was the mark of the rank. Arthur had returned his to the Senator when the late requested it.
“It’s a fine helmet but let us retained it for the next promoted Centurion.” The Senator had told him with a sneer on the face. He knew the message that he was not keep it for his heritage and above all, he had once confronted the Senator on the killing of some slaves.
“Still the sour face, huh?” Julius sat himself at the table and then reached for the jug. He poured himself a tall one and then continued on.
“Arthur, brighten up. You got your parchment and piece of land to call your own.”
“Back off, Julius. I am no more the Centurion to them or to you for now.” Arthur replied. “But give me a day or two, and I will be back. It will be then Prime and you will hailed to me.”
“Prime? Yourself? Please Arthur. Do me a favor and rolled over and die.” Julius burst out laughing. “The Eagle needs no more of your service. Retire and find yourself a whore to be your wife.”
“I had a wife then and she died before I joined the Legionnaires. Mention one more time of my wife and I will have your throat slit.” Arthur voiced out in anger and the other had ignored him.
“Arthur, you hold too much anger inside you. Let the past be bygones. Retire and be yourself with the land.” Julius took a swig of the fermented drink. He then used his wrist to rub off the spill over from his lips. “The Legion is leaving in a week. We are going back to the main continent. The Visigoths had crossed the lines once for more. Emperor Honorius III had recalled the Legion to stem the invasion.”
“What of the island?”
“Provicia Britannia will be self-ruled by the Civitaes. It’s their land after all.” Julius replied and then call for a toast to Rome.
“We return to defend our home. Yes to Rome we will defend.” Julius voice was carried throughout the tavern and many joined him and Arthur also raised his mug to salute on their next campaign. He looked to the others seated there in the tavern. Some of them were from his cohort but they ignored him. Arthur was a strict Centurion and he had few friends among the Legionnaires. They would have knifed him in the back many times but he was a renowned fighter with any of his weapon including the pugio; the dagger he had on his waist belt. He took his drink and then staggered out of the tavern. It was dusk then and the crowds were rushing for their supper at their home. He has no home to go with the barracks sealed from him. He staggered on along the cobbled street and then disappeared into the side paths. The doors there were closed but he knew of one which may open to him. He reached out with his hands to steady himself on the walls and took each step with the caution of the young child.
Suddenly his instinct kicked in and saved him a splitting headache. The blow landed on his right shoulder at the back but the Centurion was alert then. It was his years of fighting that assist him in shaking off the drunken stupor and made him what he was once. He pulled at the gladius on his waistband and stabbed it with a reverse thrust. He felt the blade cut in deep into flesh before he withdrew it. He then stepped forward before turning to look at the attacker. It was a hired hand off the alleys dressed in the loose tunic and belted sandals. The attacker was holding his left ribs where the gladius had cut. The attacker was not alone but there were three more with him.
“Retreat while you still hold of your legs.” Arthur cautioned them but the three hired hands spread out holding the wooden stick as their weapon. At the tip of the stick were the embedded nails which could tear a Man’s flesh. Arthur feigned moves with his gladius at them. Without warning, the middle figure charged at him with an upper swing of the stick at Arthur’s head but the later had side stepped and used his gladius in a tight swing at the middle section of the attacker. He cut the attacker across the torso and then when for the attack on the left attacker. The later was standing there for an opening brought his stick down to deflect the gladius thrust. Arthur had seen that move and with his left hand had grabbed the pugio at the waist belt to stab at the attacker in the throat. It was a deadly move which drew blood from the dying attacker. Arthur did not stop there and swung the gladius in a wide swing at the remaining attacker on the right arm to dislodge the stack held by it. He then withdrew to the wall to watch his dying attackers screamed at their wounds.

“Surely you are a sad Centurion to spare the life of these low born?” The voice came from above of Arthur.

Arthur; the Legend and Myth

I am BACK.....

Okay here to a tale I have been penning since May or attempted to do since then. It was slow and then slower to a virtual stop before I picked up in August. Creative writing is like a splashing on shades of colors but you need to know how it will looked like when its on the print. So I messed my shades with different strokes and I think I got the first background done.

Here is my favorite once more; Arthur, the Legend and Myth.

What's with Arthur?

Well, I grew up reading Arthur's tales in the house, at the library and also in my free time. I was once 'a chivalrous' knight before with a rubber sword (wood was too expensive to make...lol.). I galloped everywhere with it before I discovered other things.

So what's different with Arthur here?

Well, I 'remixed' (if I may used that phrase.) that tale (It was researched deep with my readings at the net from WIKI to other Postings ie. the Vulgate Tales and everything related to Arthur) plus a mix of my grandeur sauces of the creative mind. I admit it was inspired by the last Arthur movie but with a difference.

Where am I with it?

Its at Chapter 45 with 75,880 words (that is Part Two.) I break my tales into parts at the normal break of 20 of 25 chapters.

Am I publishing it here?

Yes, I am with Part One. I am going to write on till I complete it but I will print when I complete a Part. So bear with me.

What are to be expected here?

Be prepared to see Arthur in new view. Not the innocent version but the more in-depth nature of his personal thoughts and the knights including Lancelot.  As I mentioned earlier, Arthur is a legend but there are myths about him.

So here goes to a great Halloween tonight.

Trick or Treats depends on you. Or was it my door? Pardon me there was a door but now its a doorway.... And stranger things are coming in.

"Hi Arthur. You need to pee huh? Well, I get the tools to open the plate there. I did tell you to consider diapers. And don't wet the floor...."


Monday, October 17, 2016

Tweet....Tweet....I will be back.,..

Like in the cold weather, the bear needed to hibernate. I did the same but it was not the cold. It was the dread of 'nothing to write' syndrome and the other more important part of survival; the need to feed my family with food. I was caught up in my works; living my hours solving the issues there. And also drumming my fingers next to my keyboard with the creativity drained out by the spare minutes I have left before the sleep takeover.

Yes, I owe an apology to all of you, and I do. I am sorry for the sudden withdrawal. At my age, 'sudden withdrawal' does happened (pun intended ). We will leave that for another day to talk on.

So what did happened?

I could not stop writing. That's one.

Another it was my daughter who introduced me to blogging. My wife encouraged initially ( it was better than pre-viewing 'pinky images' in her words. ( more puns intended ). It was good till she asked me 'are you married to your blog?'. I had to skip the amendments i had to undergo to correct her perception for some spine painful acts. (Darn! No wonder we never need workouts in the gym when we were more agile then.)

And third, my son approached me for a paper in his college works. When your son who normally 'mumbles and muffled' his speeches to you asked you in 'clear defined words'; you have to reply. I did and his question was 'do you have a personal interest like a hobby?" ( I am sure I locked the bedroom door ....most times. It was the incessant knocks that irate me. ) I told him yes; I loved to write. I can confessed it was better not to admit to anything that may set you for more...love? Had that done but he shoved me a set of questions that asked me what I like to do. ( No puns intended but even at my age, we still do favor ourselves as younger and agile in the contortion moves. ). I read his questions and then I started... writing. And I wrote my heart out.

And here I am now back here.

I have an unfinished tale here of the Lone Ranger, He went to Hell and have yet to emerge ( it was Hell watching Suicide Squad on the huge screen..... I swore it was suicidal for old timers ...had to admit my age and ardent reader of the comic, it make my pacemaker drumming like the Zulu Drums and it wasn't Harley Quinn bending over. It was a disastrous outing like when Captain America had to unmasked on every film he made. Spare me the agony please...I get that in the work place. ).

Back to the Lone Ranger, I shall return to finished it and so will I do the unfathomable submarine tales. On the burner now, with the renewed 'agility' from some spine tingling exercise, I have done about 70K words on a legend. And its not completed yet. I need some more fingers drumming to complete it and will do so before I publish it here.

How soon?

At my older rate, soon enough. At my current rate, its improving. ( And I am not talking of my antics elsewhere. )

Oh, oh....gotta pen off. Mama Dowager is here. She is holding the whip and I was naughty.

God, don't spare me from this. Its one of the benefits of staying ....alive. ( pun intended there.)

Cheers
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Much Thanks to LitChart for the guide

 Credit to https://www.litcharts.com/shakescleare/shakespeare-translations/macbeth And to Ben Florman.  Ben is a co-founder of LitCharts. He...