Wednesday, March 1, 2023

Hamlet; the Noir Adaption 2023 Act 2 Scene 1 Sub Scene 1

 Act Two

Act Two Scene One

Sub Scene One

The concern of a father.

Polonius got news on the departure of Laertes by the airship. He sighed in relief, to see his son leave. He does not feel dismayed that the son of his was on his own as assumed by the others. Little does he know that the Great Chamberlain was never an island by himself. He held a network of allies and informers upon his own and others. Information is the key to survival in the playwright's arena. If you hear of a new play, the rats will descend to find its contents and if need be, the thieving shall be done. The more stalwarts of the playwright may cry sabotage but beneath it all, the desire runs deep in all. It’s only the raw playwright who may get the stab in the back, or be awarded the menial role to correct the script.

“It’s the survival of the fittest.” Polonius once said that line in a gathering of the playwright. “You are either with the strong or be devoured by them.”

“Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and others have greatness thrust upon them. You took mine for yours.” One among the audience stood up. He was a young playwright and felt many a time, he was cheated of his genius writings.

“I take it you did quote the true meaning of Shakespeare here …. Was it Twelfth Night? Those words eluded me for I have not written it but I will take all criticism like any actor. An unappreciative apprentice.” Polonius brushed the subtle meaning of the meaning. The young writer was to rebuttal then but was removed forcibly.

“Youngbloods are always in a rage,” Polonius spoke to the audience. “We just have to let them grow themselves out.”

“You called for me?” Polonius heard the other voice while holding the headset of the communication set courtesy of Graham Bell.

“Yes…Yes… Reynaldo, it’s me Polonius.” The elderly man spoke into the headset. “Can you hear me?”

“Loud and clear, Great Chamberlain.”

“It’s Laertes. He left for Paris last night. Did you receive him there?”

“Yes, I had. He was met by the ship and taken to his quarters.” Reynaldo replied. “He looked fine. Virile and raring to get back to work.”

“You shall do marvelous wisely, good Reynaldo. Before you visit him, inquire about his behavior?”Polonius sounded like any concerned father. “Good Reynaldo, it would be extremely wise of you to ask around about his behavior before you visit him.”

“My lord, I did intend it.” Reynaldo in the employ of the Great Chamberlain assured the other. “That was my plan, my lord.”

“Marry, well said, very well said. Look you, sir. Inquire me first what Danskers are in Paris,And how, and who, what means, and where they keep10What company at what expense; and findingBy this encompassment and drift of questionThat they do know my son, come you more nearerThan your particular demands will touch it.Take you, as ’twere, some distant knowledge of him,15As thus: “I know his father and his friends,And, in part, him.” Do you mark this, Reynaldo?

“Excellent, good, good. First, find out what Danish people (Danish) are in Paris. Who they are, how much money they have, where they live, who their friends are, and how much they spend. And if…. through this roundabout and indirect questioning—that they happen to know my son, you’ll end up finding out much more than if you asked specific questions about him.” Polonius read off his demands then.

“Talk as if you vaguely know Laertes, such as, “I know his father and his friends and know him a little.” Do you understand all this, Reynaldo?”

“Ay, very well, my lord.” Reynaldo listened to the usual from the concerned father. “Yes, very well, my lord.”

“And in part him, but,” you may say, “not well. But, if it be he I mean, he’s very wild.” Polonius thought of his son as a wandering stud in the wild. “Addicted so and so. —” And there put on him.”

“What forgeries you please? Marry, none so rank as may dishonor him. Take heed of that but, sir, such wanton, wild, and usual slips as are companions noted and must be known to youth and liberty.” Polonius is concerned about the sowing of seeds to unmatchable ones. “Reynaldo, you hearing me there.”

“Yes, I heed.”

“You should say,” As if the man was correcting the script of the play. “I know him a little, but not well. I think, from what I’ve heard, that he’s very wild, and addicted to this and that. From there create whatever lies about him that you can think up. Of course, nothing so bad that it would shame him. Be careful about that. But feel free to make up stories about the wild and crazy things that young men who are on their own typically get into.”

“As in gambling, my lord?” Reynaldo left the bait.

“Yes, or drinking, dueling, swearing, fighting, going to prostitutes—that sort of thing.”

“My lord, that would dishonor him!” Reynaldo cried out.

“Faith, no, as you may season it in the charge.” The old man cautioned the one he paid to take care of his son. “If you must. Put another scandal on him. That he is open to incontinence….. “

On hearing that from the elderly man, Reynaldo had the vision of Laertes bent to the tabletop on the offer.

“That’s not my meaning but breathe his faults so quaintly.” The elderly man snapped in. “That hey may seem the taints of liberty. He is not perfect.”

Being bent over does stifle the freedom of movement, thought Reynaldo.

“The flash and outbreak of a fiery mind. A savageness in unreclaimèd blood of general assault.” Those words from the elderly man made Reynaldo pout his lips as what a scene impact it would have made on stage; assault of the rear.

“Oh, no, not if you say it with the right spin. You shouldn’t say that he’s sexually indulgent, that’s not what I mean.” The elderly man pulls the reins to halt the gallop down the hill.

“Aye, my Lord. I know your meaning.” Reynaldo said but the elderly man was onto his ramblings.

“Instead, just mention these faults lightly, as if you think they're nothing more than the minor faults that sprout in someone new to freedom—like the products of a strong mind and untamed youth—and the kind of thing that occurs in lots of young men.” The elderly man has not paused his sentences and continues ranting. 

“Yes, my lord. I would like to know that.”

“All right. Here’s my idea. And I do think it's a bit clever.” The elderly man takes claim. “As you casually mention these minor faults and small blemishes as if everyone has heard of them, watch the person with whom you’re talking. If whoever you’re talking to has ever seen Laertes do any of the things you mention, he’ll mark his agreement by saying something like “good sir” or “friend” or “gentleman”—or something like that, depending on the person’s background.”

“Very good, my lord. I understand, sir.” Total adherence was given.

“And then, sir, does he this, he does— What was I about to say? By the mass, I was about to say something. Where did I leave?”

“Huh…” Reynaldo paused to think but the elderly man was off on the track once more.

“At “closes in the consequence.” Ay, marry he closes thus: “I know the gentleman. I saw him yesterday”—or “it’s another day,” Or then, or then, with such or such —“and, as you say. There was the gaming, they overtook in’s rouse. There falling out at tennis,” or, perchance, “I saw him enter such a house of sale”—Videlicet a brothel, or so forth. See you now, your bait of falsehood takes this carp of truth.” The elderly man ranted on as if he was re-writing the script.

“And thus do we of wisdom and reach, With windlasses and with assays of bias. By indirections find directions out. So my former lecture and advice. Shall you, my son? You have me, have you not?”

“Absolutely….. My lord, I have.” Reynaldo in the doubts then “Whatever it may take to get him in line or back?”

“God be wi’ you. Fare you well.” Polonius choose to end the call. “God bless you. Goodbye.”

“One last word, Reynaldo. Observe his inclination in yourself.”

“Me? I am …”

“One cannot be overly indulged. If you were him, music may help. It soothes him well.”

“I shall, my lord.” Reynaldo found himself then cut off on the line. “Let him ply his music. I hope he’s studying his music as he’s supposed to.”

To the young man whose father was overly concerned on, music was far from his mind then.

“Me overindulgence? I cared not as long as I have the means to get it.” the dues are paid on time.” Reynaldo then dialed another number.

“Could you send the dame earlier? I will need her services for myself. Yes, she can be the Dame of the Ascot for all I care, as long she will take on a stud like me. And could she sing?”

 

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