Monday, October 3, 2011

In the works now.....

Extracts from a new story.......
ala David Morreal / George Higgins / Eric Lustbader / Alistair Maclean.....
'I spent a great deal of time with Che Guevara while I was in Havana. I believe he was far less a mercenary than he was a freesdom fighter. ' Maureen O'Hara
1520 hrs
The lunch crowd was trying to get back to their works in some areas where the streets are jam packed. Cars are honking and irrate drivers are getting the urge to knock some one. But the sight of the rain would had cheered many is a bane in this traffic conditions.
The first sight of trouble began on 5th Street when five members of the Krigs in their cadillac saw the Prized SUV on the left lane turning into theirs. Marco ‘Dodi’ brother died in a shoot out with the Prized a year back in some off road trail, and today he is seeing those darned Prized so close here. He raised his AK47 and push the lever to full burst. He told his driver member to do a right lane turn now and shut up. Pedri, the driver did as he was told swung the car onto the oncoming traffic and clipped his bumper on the expnsive cadillac. The other driver, a lawyer by profession saw the hit on his car and when he saw the looks on those occupants, he kept his curses to himself.
The cadillac swung in parallel with the SUV and Marco did the honorable thing; he took vengeance for his brother’s death. His AK 47 spun out the 30 rounds in seconds, and he threw the rifle down to pulled out his M1911 to shoot but he was shot by the other side’s retaliation in AK 47’s too. Pedri was next and his feet never left the accelerator so the car hit the one in front. Unknown to them, the third car behind the Prized one was another one of theirs. So four youths with AK47’s came running out to shoot at the Krigs in the cadillac.
That was the first shoout between the gangs with the guns provided by the Mahua Gang.
But the Mahua Gang was not be excluded.

Be there as the clock is ticking...... or is it clicking on the blog.

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