Friday, January 20, 2023

Buzz Buzzer ... Embarking on the last Dante's poem; Paradise

 

Heaven’s allowed, I will get this tale down this round. It was completed in late 2021 and left idle till today. I had to re-read what I wrote then. 

For those of us who were on the journey of the tale may have forgotten the contents. So here I am to explore the tale here. 

This is an adaption of mine; dark and different.

When did I do the sci-fi twist come in? Honestly, I can’t remember. Most of my tales are never scripted or framed in the write, but more of when I do type it, I conjure the contents….. ala Merlin style.

Okay back to the tale. It’s a dream within dreams and multi-layered in there.

 Who is Dante here?

He is named Virgil, the co-developer of the program with Beatrice initially. It was to re-enact the Greek era. Dante is his pseudonym as he liked to read Dante’s poems.

Who is then Virgil who assisted Dante?

Virgil in the program is an insertion of the developer to assist him. How was it done? It will be explained later.

Who is Fabricius?

He is a hacker who assisted Beatrice and was sent in to assist Dante/Virgil. He has some friends with him to assist Beatrice.

Who are they?

Ethel, Eunos, and Nicholas. The last was damaged in the mind when he was last in the dream. 

Who is Daniel Arnold?

He is the father of Beatrice and also a developer. And also has another twin daughter of his, named Bernice.

Who is Bernice?

Bernice is the evil twin sister of Beatrice and controlled the program from within. She claimed herself to be God. She was assisted by others.

Who are the others?

The Magnificent Seven. or the Universe; Moon, Mercury, Venus, Mars, Saturn, and Jupiter, and finally the Sun which was the emperor. Then came the final two rulers of the Seven; the Fixed Stars.

What is the Universe?

It’s a dream world, and those placed there are prisoners of the Queen kept in there.

Who is Malthida?

She is the last design created by Dante/Virgil with Bernice and called the developer Great Father.

And now to Paradise.

And their God is a woman.

God bless us all

 Here's to 2023.


 

 

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