Sunday, January 31, 2021

Story Write Compilations Volume I Stories 16

 Ratpunzel...

 

Author's Note:

Never said that rats are bad for the home. There are some which are adorable. You don't believe me. Look to your friends and asked are all adorable. Not all, huh. Some are like rats too. See, it's the same at all if you would see them differently.

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Have you seen rats in your place? They are lovely creatures if you learn to appreciate them from an artistic view as you would of a falcon. They have a thick fur on them, normally dark gray as it allows them to blend in with the dark corners. They have these whiskers which allowed them to smell stuff they need for their diet. And the marvelous part of them is the long tail. It's sleek like a long whip wield by Batswoman, except she is feline and not mousy. Okay, rats are known to bring diseases as they moved in dirty areas, squireling through damp pipes or tunnels, and they carry one too many wrong occupants on their fur. So do dogs and cats, but we considered them domesticated so it's okay.

 

So here is my story of a rat named Ratpunzel.



Mama was a good mother and wife; she gave birth to a litter of them young pinkish young un’s. She nurtured them well and kept them safe in this dark recess of the house. Pa died in a trap some days back, so Mama had to double up her effort. And she did it; escaping man traps and cats; ugly black ones with white spots. On the day she saw her litter grew to an age where they can leave the litter, she saw one particular one. It was Ratpunzel; this rascally rat has the most beautiful tail, all straight and long. Mama was touched by her beauty, and she kept Ratpunzel at the litter. To her, this darling rat was her treasure to be looked at and held in the limelight of fame. She was teaching the little kiddo some nifty steps to start her basic dance moves. And so Ratpunzel lived in the same place called the litter for some time, with her Mama always there; feeding and taking care of her. She even combs the tail with the finest silky cloth so it will gleam in the dark shadow. And one day, poor Mama missed her cue to run across the room and was devoured by the black cat with white spots. Urghh... it was an ugly scene to describe.

 

But poor Ratpunzel knew not of it, as she had not left the litter since birth, and there were no scraps of newsprint to read. So she got hungry and she called out to Mama. It was by coincidence on that day, a prime dashing rat of the best breed of descent was strolling by. His nose picked up the scent of the new rat on the block. And he heard the sweet pleading voice of Ratpunzel for food. Dash; that's his name immediately rushed to the nearest food cache ( there were a few those days ), and he retrieves the biggest cheese he could find. Dash brought it to the litter but he found a small entrance to go in. And he was not that nimble or small to crawl through. So he called out to the hungry rat inside; ‘My name is Dash. I have cheese here; the finest in the house. How can I pass this to you?’

 

‘I will lower my tail and you leave it on it. Then I will slowly bring it in. And thank you.’ Sweet words to said in the moment of help, and so Dash did as he was told; pieces after pieces he leaves on the long tail that wind it back to the little through the small gap in the wall. Now, this went on for some time, Dash will come and said; ‘unwind your tail, and I will feed you’. Ratpunzel will do so, and the feeding went on. Okay, love was in the tunnel too. One day, Dash was getting impatient so he brought the ‘Tunnel Rats’. ‘Break it down so I can see my Ratpunzel’. And they did; these boys are good and old plaster came off like paper mache. And for the first time dash saw his love. She was beautiful with her long sleek tail, but she was alarmed. Dash is past his prime and wobbling on his hind legs. You see, when Dash first heard of Ratpunzel, he was just about to clear prime last moments, and you know time flows. But Dash was not to give up and he went on his nose saying; ‘if looks matters, would I had stayed so long? I did peek at you through the gap, and I saw how fat you were but I still love you.’

 

And so looks were cast aside and love prevails. And Dash never looked beyond the tail, and Rat of her cheese as long they are stale.

 

( If look counts, unmarried man and woman would be abundant. Thankfully love is blind. )

 

 

 

 


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