New Pangaea comes to an End?

Hi All

I just completed the full posting of New Pangaea. I am sure many of you read the parts and please feedback on the tale...anything that I can improve or work on.

More to it, I just noticed one of my tale "Awakening my love" hit a 100th downloads since it was posted. I want to say thank you.

So let me know any feedback.

Cheers