Monday, October 17, 2022

Dante V Canto XII Scene I

 Canto XII

First Terrace; Prideful

Scene I

“If my memories served me right, pride was not referred to by itself but along with prejudice yet the latter was may be considered as sinful,” Virgil spoke of it on the walk with Dante, while they trailed the group of souls with the burdens on their back.

Masters, do the same to them, and stop your threatening, knowing that he who is both their Master and yours is in heaven and that there is no partiality with him. Ephesians 6:9.” Dante spoke of the verse from the Book. “It was the veiled message of the poems of Dante.”

“Have you read Pride and Prejudice by one named Jane Austen in 1813?” Dante asked of Dante.

“I am programmed what was loaded by my creator and not by reading. I do have my contents of Janes Austen, including the works of her other books; Sense and Sensibility. Both books including Pride and Prejudice was the works of satire on the behavior and conditions prevailing then of the living souls.”

“The emphasis was placed on subtle behaviors that signaled someone’s class background. Examples might include how one dressed, the vocabulary one used, one’s table manners, and what sort of topics one understood to be appropriate for discussion.” Dante added in. (https://www.sparknotes.com/lit/pride/genre/) “Much of what was described in Pride and Prejudice would have been recognizable and familiar. The novel also focuses on the personal emotional experiences of the characters rather than political or historical events. For example, while the presence of the regiment implies that a war is taking place, Austen does not discuss geopolitical events in her novel.”

“It’s no different to what we have now.” Dante compared to the war that was waged by the Empire and Federation. “I felt like an ox led by the events that did seem to have changed.”

“Turn thine eyes downwards; it will well for thee, to cheer the way, to look upon the bed of thy footsteps,” Virgil spoke to Dante.

Dante looked up and then straightened his posture.  He felt not his burden lightened but the sight had taken on the visions on the weight carried by the souls there. He did not speak of the sights to Virgil but he did feast his eyes on them.

“It’s a metaphor of sorts,” Dante told himself. “The slab of stone there can be compared to the tombstones of the dead. Such a view reminded me of the death of a living body, and to many, it will bring tears to the ones affected by those who were dead there. Not etched there were the reason they died but their names to the living ones. It seems befitting them to be remembered as such than for their deeds, or misdeeds.”

“Like pride which Dante wrote on his poems, that of mythological figures who have suffered for their pride: Thymbraeus, Mars, and Pallas, who contemplate the giants they’ve dismembered; Nimrod at the foot of his Tower of Babel; Niobe amongst her fourteen murdered children; Saul, who died on his sword; Arachne, who was turned into a spider; Rehoboam, who’s running from a chariot Alcmaeon; the children of Sennacherib as they attack their father Tomyris; the Assyrians; and, finally, the city of Troy”

“All the ones mentioned may still be here, carrying the burden of their prideful life.” Dante sighed. He looked to the ones before him. He saw the setting sun and cried out in a loud voice.

“Lift thy head; there is no longer time for going thus abstracted. See yonder an Angel, who is making ready to come toward us; see how the sixth hand-maiden is returning from the service of the day. I am to tell ---” Dante was interrupted by the presence of the Angel who appeared there at the side of him.

“Dante, you are to break your vow not to tell them but your words rang hope in them. I cannot deny you have lifted much of the burden in them but they are still bound in this program.”

“I saw their plight. I wanted to ---” Dante was cut off.

“You wanted to assure them that they are imprisoned and lay in the hope to fight back but these are not fighters. They are experiments that the Doctor had brought in to be tested like yourself. I think you had seen enough of the First Terrace and could move on.” The Angel told Dante. “Beyond there is the cleft; there you may ascend.”

Dante looked at the spot indicated and felt a stirring on his forehead. He reached to touch it and felt one of the ‘P” was erased.

“I have taken off one of the ‘P’ to advance you to the next stage.” The Angel told Dante.

“Virgil, I am lifted.” Dante turned to look at Virgil who had remained apart from the interaction with the Angel.

“Poet, you are blessed with one of it but the rest remained. When the ‘P’ still on your forehead is removed one by one on achievement of the tasks, thy progress will be swifter or lighter to the next terrace.” Virgil told Dante. “It’s the lock mechanism there.”

“It’s a programming routine.” Virgil smiled. “Since you are cleared, let us move on.”

“You are a ---miscreant. Do you not have any concern ---” Dante was upset by Virgil's unappreciative of the plight of those there.

“I am and above all, I am unattached to any of their needs for I know that they can be freed once you completed the task here. The longer we dwell here, we will be absorbed into the program. Make haste, Poet. We are to move or be consumed.” Virgil hit back.

“In Hell like the writings of my idol, Dante the Poet, I have also encountered individuals guilty of pride in the very lowest circle, encased in ice, unable to move. Their punishment is an apt illustration of the coldness of heart that characterized their dealings on earth, in which they turned more and more upon themselves, shunning God and finding increasingly less solace in the company of others.” Dante grew in confidence. (Adapted from https://www.rosarycenter.org/the-capital-sins-pride/).

“Sin lays siege to that community, and pride is our community’s special foe because it seduces us into imagining we have no need for anyone, or anything, beyond ourselves. It was the words of St. Gregory the Great written very poetically, but seriously, when he observed. Pride, the queen of vices, when it has vanquished the heart, forthwith delivers it into the hands of its lieutenants, the seven principal vices, that they may despoil it and produce vices of all kinds.” Dante continued.

“I will not be consumed in Purgatory. We move on for the journey here has only begun.” Dante resolved then to move on for the souls he saw there. He had conquered the sin of his pride.

“I am truly in the quest with a mad poet. Or rather that of a renegade program’s construct.” Virgil muttered with a tone of sarcasm. 

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