"Dad I need help."
At the tender age of twenty, he could do a lot of damage that required my help and honestly post-natal was one of it in my mind. He was long 'over due post natal' anyway. With the mum's help, All other motions in life was deemed inactivated.
This is the result I had to churned out in one hour or was it two.
"a cinematic screen write...."
Darned I should be in his class coaching them with monetary rewards and no mother's around when I waved my wand.
Here are the things father have to do nowadays.
Here are the things father have to do nowadays.
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Scene
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Location
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Events
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1
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Research Facility meeting hall.
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A group of researchers in meeting. Their discussion was on their
research.
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^Five
scientist seated there at long table discussing their notes
^ CEO steps
in and called for meeting
^ CEO
noticed Joahn not there
^ Called for
staff to find him
^Staci who
was there walked out
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2
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Reseach facility hallway
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Doctor Joahn, Genetic Expert argues on the results with other
scientist. Nine subjects tested so far that went through the advanced checks.
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^Staci found
Joahn just outside the corridor in a rush
^Joahn
joined in and presented his notes that Nara was improving but needed more tests
to confirm
^An argument
arose then on the level of tests
^CEO got
upset and stated that already nine subjects had undergone the tests but eight
had died
^”is this
what I paid for?”
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3
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Joahn lab
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Joahn walked out and went back to his lab. In there was Subject 009
was in the small room in the lab. She was a young girl at age of nine.
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^Meeting was
over
^Joahn back
in his lab looking at the new results
“Joahn was
interrupted by the young girl seated in the glass cubicle
^’Hello,
father’.
^Joahn
ignored the girl and continued his reading
^Are you mad
at me?’
“Joahn
ignored her and walked out. He was concerned on her but he cannot revealed his
feelings
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4
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Subject 09 room
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Staci, Joahn’s colleague on the research walked in. She approached
the Subject 009 and was friendly.
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^ Staci pass
Joahn who ignored her
^Staci
walked into the lab shared with Joahn
^’Hello,
Staci. What is wrong with Joahn?’
^Staci
approached the girl and talked to her
^’He is busy
and cannot talk now but I can’.
“^Staci
spend time talking to the subject 009 aka Nara.
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5
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Joahn lab
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Joahn argues with Staci and stormed off.
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^Joahn came
back and saw Staci talking to Nara
^He argued
with her on getting close to Nara
^his action
scared Nara who then hid in the corner
^’There are
no interaction allowed’
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6
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Subject 09
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Subject 009 aka Nara (Nanotech Artificial Resources Artifact) asked
Staci a lot of questions of herself and also of Joahn.
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^Joahn once
more stormed out of the lab
^Staci
called for Nara to comfort her
^’Am I
real?’ Nara asked
^Staci tried
to explain what he could to a young girl of nine
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7
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Joahn Apartment room
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Joahn entered his personal room where he kept his personal research
on Nara. He keyed in new notes.
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^Joahn
arrived back at his apartment
^he went
straight to his personal room where his research works are seen
^He checked
the notes and concurred the findings
^ Joahn
sighed then and asked himself
^’am I God?
How can I create a living being?’
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8
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Joahn apartment house hall
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Joahn discovered something new. Nara was growing too fast but her
condition was stable.
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^The machine
beeped and a new result was shown
^It showed
new data on Nara
^’She is
growing ….well….too well….too fast…’
^ Joahn
keyed in more data to seek the results.
^Joahn made
up his mind
^’Nara need
to be removed’
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9
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Research Facility room / hall / joahn lab
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Joahn prepares a large box and snatched Nara off the facility. He
drove off in the van leaving Staci staring at him from the window.
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^Joahn drove
a van to the research facility
^He unloaded
a large box he had constructed
^He went to
his lab and called Nara
^’I am
taking you for more tests’
^Nara
climbed into the box
^Joahn
pushed the box into the van and drove off
^Unknown to
him, Staci was watching from a nearby window. Tears flowed her eyes.
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10
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Ten years later, small town a little house.
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Nara then a teenager walked back from school. She saw Joahn pushed
into the dark van.
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^Ten years
forward
^On the
street of a small town, a teenager named Nara was waving to her neighbour
^She then
saw the dark van at her house with Joahn
^She saw him
pushed into the van before it drove off
^Nara wanted
to scream but she was told by Joahn not to in such situation.
^’Do not
scream or chase after me. Find the emergency pack and run to hide. Stayed away
for one week and then called Staci at this number.’
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11
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House
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Nara ran to hide. She was told what to do if this happen.
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^Nara
collected the bag and took to a friend’s house nearby to sleep over.
^the next
day, Nara took to the bus to a far city. She stayed at the motel alone, and was
crying.
^seven days
was a long time to someone alone.
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12
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Big City
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Nara arrived at the train station. She called a number given.
A person came to find her. It was Staci.
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^Nara took
the train to a designated city.
^Nara called
the number. It was Staci who answered
^Nara was
reunited with Staci
^”Joahn was
taken…’
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13
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Restaurant
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Staci reunited with Nara. Check on her and was surprised.
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^Nara was
reunited with Staci
^”Joahn was
taken…’
^Staci took
Nara to a hotel to stay and rest
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14
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Hotel room
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Hotel Room TV showed an interview of the company that funded the
research. They spoke of genetics design. They claimed knowledge and then said
Joahn and Staci had stolen their works.
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^when Nara
was sleeping, Staci saw the news on the TV
^It was
about Joahn and Staci
^They were
fugitives wanted by the police then.
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15
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City Streets
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Staci drove Nara when she complained of illness. Staci discovered
that Nara was really dying. She was unwell and only Joahn knows her cure.
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^Staci got
Nara into the car and drove around. She needed time and space to think
^Nara
complained of pains and fever
^’I need my
medication’
^Staci tried
to help but she cannot find the cure
^’Only Joahn
knows’
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16
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City Hospital room
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Staci admitted in Nara out of desperation. Doctors tried to save her
but were held back by her genetic forms.
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^Staci
panicked and drove to the Hospital
^Nara was
admitted into the ER
^’Pulse
dropping. We need the machine on standby’
^’give her
five cc of that.’
^’She is
going once more…Hit her with another five cc.’
^the ER
scene was chaotic
^’Doctor
Staci, tell me more on your patient?’
^Then the
doctor in ER recognized Staci from the news
^’She is a
fugitive’
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17
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City Hospital front gate/
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The Research Company came to the Hospital but Nara was taken away by
Staci.
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^Staci
managed to escape with Nara
^Just then
the Research Company staff arrived
^They
discover that Staci had escaped
^ Staci was
driving Nara in a stolen car
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18
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Staci house room
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Staci can’t stop the dying process in Nara. She had no choice but to
surrender to the Research Company
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^Staci
bought Nara to her house
^Staci tried
to access her lab computer by remote but it was blocked
^Staci tried
to cure Nara but she had no medicine at her house
^Staci knew
that she had to surrender
^’Police, this
is Staci….’
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19
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Research Facility front gate/
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Joahn and Staci were reunited in their old lab with Nara as their
subject. All the other subjects have
perished and were destroyed.
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^Joahn was
in his old lab looking at the results from previous tests.
^Joahn
tossed the notes to the floor just when Staci stepped in
^’Nara is
back here’
^’Why? You
were to protect her?’ Joahn had asked
^’The only
protection she have is here. Our lab holds the cure.’
^’Eight dead
and you tell me there is a cure?’
^’We can argue
and watch Nara dies…” Staci was getting emotional then.
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20
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Joahn lab
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Joahn and Staci continued their research. There was a quarrel.
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^Joahn
stabilized Nara condition but her damage was extensive
^Joahn and
Stasci continued more tests with the equipment there
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21
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Joahn lab outside/ Research facility hallway
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Staci walked out. She was upset at Joahn. He was still the man she knew before.
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^After days
of working, Staci stepped out of the lab
^Staci was
upset that Joahn was still the cold man she knew
^’To him,
everything was a subject matter..” Staci mumbled to herself
^’He does
not know love…or even friendship..’
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22
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Nara room
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Staci met up with Nara. They talked some more.
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^Staci
visited Nara in the glass cubicle
^The ladies
talked and Nara told Staci of her last ten years
^’Father was
kind to me. He never was much but he loved me.’
^Staci felt
remorseful of her previous emotional outburst
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23
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Joahn Apartment room
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Joahn opened up his old files. He read more and then found his joy.
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^Joahn
walked past the guard that took him back to his apartment
^It was all
there the whole setup as if he never left the place
^he
collected his hidden notes from behind the wall
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24
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Joahn apartment kitchen
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Joahn did not see the man who walked in. He shot Joahn and then left
with the research notes.
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^Joahn did
not see the guard who followed in later
^Joahn was
shot in the back and took the notes
^Joahn woke
up with a pain on his back. He lost a lot of blood but he could move
^Joahn
called the police for help
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25
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City Hospital Emergency Unit room
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Joahn was wheeled into the Emergency Unit. He was treated by doctors.
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^Joahn was
rushed to the ER
^’Doctors,
we got a life one’
^’I got a
GSW in the back. Bullet in the left ribs but missed the heart.’
^’Pressure dropping.
I need a clip to stem the blood flow’
^’Prep for
surgery now’
^’Bullet
removed and let us close those damages’
^”Sutures
needed and then we can move on’
^’Lucky man
his heart was not shot.’
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26
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City Hospital room
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Joahn was saved. He was recovering on the hospital bed when Staci
came. She told him that Nara was moved to another section.
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^Staci
stepped into the medical room and visited Joahn
^’Nara is
stable.’ Staci reassured the recovering
Joahn
^’All
charges from the company dropped if you come back’
^’They shot
me’
^”We know
but for Nara, let us save her first. She is ….like a daughter to you.’
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27
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Joahn got upset and tried to leave but he was unwell. Staci told him to
wait till he recovered
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^’I will
cure Nara …by myself’ Joahn tried to moeve but he can’t without opening his
wounds.
^’Recover
first. We can’t do anything until you arewell. Nara needs you now and then.’
^Joahn
agreed and then he rested for his wounds.
^ His
shooting was considered as attempted burglary and case was closed.
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28
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Research Facility monitor room
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Three months have passed. Nara is in the lab. Her body was rigged
with wires.
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^Nara was
strapped to the metal bed and wires were over her body.
^’Vital
signs are low but she is alive’
^”Maintain
status until her researcher comes back’
^’I heard he
is discharged. What his name again? Joahn or Jones?’
^Nara smiled
weakly. Her father was coming back. She may die in peace then.
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29
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Research Facility secret lab
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Joahn walked in and saw Nara. She was older in her forties. The
acceleration of her dying was faster.
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^Joahn
tossed the results shown to him and then glared at the other scientist
^’You are
killing her. She is not a lab material. She is human.’
^’She may be
to you, Doctor Joahn but here with us all of them are research material. We
kept her alive for your sake.’
^’By slowing
her dying you are killing her in the worst form’
^’She may be
dying but she is alive for you now’.
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30
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Research lab joahn lab
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Joahn was restrained and return to his lab. He pretended to resume
his works but he was planning on how to escape.
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^Joahn
wanted to hold Nara but he was withheld
^’You will
do your work while Staci gets to be near her’
^Nara was
moved to a more secure lab
^Joahn resumed
his work but he was also planning her escape once more.
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31
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Staci lab
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Joahn was reunited with Staci. He shared his plan with her.
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^’Nara
cannot stay here. She is dying. I can’t help her. We need to get her out.’
^Staci
agreed but they need to plan the escape.
^’I need a
diversion to get to escape.’
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32
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Research Facility secret lab
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Joahn sneaked into the lab where Nara was located while Staci created
a diversion.
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^Joahn
sneaked into the lab where Nara was located using Staci’ access card
^Staci
meanwhile left trails of fire bombs made in her lab
^the bombs
ignited and the research facility was on fire
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33
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Joahn lab
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The fire spread fast
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^’Refuge
area on fire’
^’Animal
testing lab on fire’
^’Calling
for the fire brigade’
^’We have
fire in the admin office too’
^’Which
lunatic is doing this?’
^The water
sprinklers triggered as staff evacuate the building
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34
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Research facility secret lab
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Joahn grabbed Nara and escaped during the fire.
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^Joahn
released Nara and placed her on wheeled bed to move her out.
^He took the
path to the rear and passed the burning rooms
^His car was
parked there
^ Joahn
drove off with Nara
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35
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City Hospital Emergency Room
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Nara was admitted into the Emergency Room. The doctors tried to save
her.
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^’We got a
live one’
^’She is old
and dying, doctors. Save her for she could be your mother in law’
^’Bad humor,
Doctor Loong.’
^’Who cares?
Mine is at home taking coffee. Anyone wants to adopt this one?’
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36
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City Hospital Emergency room outside
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Reporters came to speak to Joahn who told them everything.
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^Joahn saw
the reporters that came there to interview the staff that were treated there.
^Joahn made
a decision then.
^He
approached a major news reporter
^He told his
side of the story
^Soon he was
mobbed by more reportters
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37
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Research Facility outside
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The company was raided by the authorities
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^On the TV
screens were these messages and news
^’Research
lab was raided today by the authorities soon after the fire’
^’Records
were seized and the Management questioned’
^’Illegal research
undertaken there by companies’
^’We have no
comments. Quoted from CEO who had offered to resign.’
^’We
condemned the research. ‘
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38
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The cemetery
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Staci stood over the tombstone of one named Nara.
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^The funeral
was a simple affair with only Staci in attendance
^’From ashes
to ashes’. The rites were performed on a
single coffin lowered to the ground
^On the
tombstone were these words; ‘she had lived like us and died like us.’
^Staci seen
walking away to begin a new life.
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39
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Airport
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Staci stood looking at the Departure Schedule.
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^Staci
checked her phone for messages but there was none. Soon she hear d his voice.
^’You were
there?’ Joahn asked Staci on the funeral
^Staci
nodded. “Why didn’t you come?’
^”I have my
reasons. Just like mine to you. We will meet one day but I can’t tell you
when.’
^With that
Joahn left Staci at the airport
^Staci
walked into the Departure Hall
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40
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Joahn Apartment
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Joahn opened his old files. He read it and then looked at the bed.
There lies Nara; the new Nara at the tender age of year one.
Joahn was starting the new Nara research.
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^Joahn sat
on the familiar seat looking at the new equipment. He opened his old files and
read it.
^’Nara;
Subject 010.’
^in the new
glass cubicle was a new baby girl at the tender age of one.
^Above the
cubicle were these words; there are no
ties between us except fake love to spur growth.
^’Nara 010,
I made a mistake with Nara 009. I created my love for her. It detached me from
my real work. I will not do it once more. You will be just Nara 010 to me. These are my vows as a scientist once more. ‘
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