Monday, April 10, 2023

Hamlet; the Noir Adaption 2023 Act 4 Scene 5 Sub Scene 1

 Act Four

Act Four Scene Five

Sub Scene One

Ophelia in distress

In the chamber of Gertrude, a rarity was any meeting to be held there, but it was done. The castle walls do have ears, and there was an important matter to be discussed.

The madam was entertaining both Horatio, Queen, and another gentleman dressed in a three-piece suit held up by a grim expression and smoked a pipe with the foul-smelling tobacco.

“Madam, you must.”

“And I will not speak with her,” Gertrude said.

“She is importunate, indeed distract; her mood will needs be pitied.” The pipe smoker told her. “It’s my professional view.”

“What would she have?” Gertrude looked at the gentleman whom she has to pay good money to get him there and listened to another raving mad induced individual. If not for Ophelia being looked at her as would be her daughter, she would have long discarded the need there.

“She speaks much of her father, says she hears tricks are i’ th’ world and hems and beats her heart. Events that spurn enviously at straws, speak things in doubt that carry but half sense. Her speech is nothing, Yet the unshapèd use of it doth move the hearers to the collection.” The gentleman was saying that Ophelia was unsettled about her father’s death; she told him but the words came out in half sense or nothing of meaning, yet it shapes into some collection of bonds that she had with her father if one listened well.

“They aim at it and botch the words up fit to their thoughts; which, as her winks and nods and gestures yield them, indeed would make one think there might be thought, though nothing sure, yet much unhappily.” The gentleman continued. Ophelia spoke her mind incoherently as her mind was in fragments. In other words, moments like this, when the unknowing may frame their conclusions may pass on the gossip thus harming the inflicted.

“They're good she were spoken with, for she may strew dangerous conjectures in ill-breeding minds.” Horatio pleaded with the madam. “She is …fragile.”

“Let her come in,” Gertrude said before she turned to the doctor. “You may leave, Doctor Strange. Your fees will be delivered to your office.”

The one named as the doctor bowed to the madam and took his leave.

“Open the drapes and let fresh air cover the chamber. I am suffocating with the stench from the pipe. Godless person to ever enjoy a puff like that.” Gertrude told Horatio.

“Horatio, I am with my sickness soul (as sin’s true nature is), each toy seems prologue to some great amiss. So full of artless jealousy is guilt, it spills itself in fearing to be spilled.” Gertrude was depressed that each moment will cause her guilt feeling.

The sounds of singing were heard in the corridor.

“She cometh.” Ophelia appeared at the doorway.

“Where is the beauteous Majesty of Denmark?” Ophelia stood there, her appearance haggard, with unkempt hair, and her clothes untidy, yet she held flowers in her hair and hands.

“How now, Ophelia?” Gertrude asked.

“How should I ….your true love know from another one? By his cockle hat and staff and his sandal shoon.” Ophelia sang as she was addressing Gertrude who seen to be more attracted by wealth than love.

“Alas, sweet lady, what imports this song? It’s so unbecoming.” Gertrude was dismayed by the singing. It was a bawdy song heard at the taverns.

“Say you? Nay, pray you, mark.” Ophelia sang. “He is dead and gone, lady.”

“He is dead and gone; at his head a grass-green turf, at his heels a stone.” Ophelia sang from King Lear.

Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade,
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
Sea-nymphs hourly ring his knell:
Ding-dong.
Hark! now I hear them—Ding-dong, bell

(King Lear Act 1 Scene 2)

“Father is laid to rest. “Oh, ho!” Ophelia went into the high tone.

“Nay, but Ophelia—” Gertrude protested/

“Pray you, mark.” Ophelia sings “White his shroud as the mountain snow—”

Claudius appeared then.

“Alas, look here, my lord.” Gertrude motioned to her lover. “She is ….”

“Who?” Claudius saw then Ophelia.

“Come, my coach!” Ophelia waved her arms as if she was calling for others to follow her like the teacher calling in her students.

“Is she …” Claudius was to ask when Ophelia cut in.

“Larded all with sweet flowers; which bewept to the ground did not go with true-love showers.” Ophelia kept on dancing and singing while dropping the flower’s petal. She was relating that some of us may bring flowers to the grave but our heart is not there.

“One for you, one for you, and one here too.” Ophelia placed the petals on the flooring. “Nop, you must not take that. It’s hers. Naughty of you there.”

“How long hath she been thus?” Claudius asked. The Emperor steps in and looked at the lady dancing and singing to herself. Ophelia saw the other and stopped.

“Hello, my lord. How fares Hamlet? I do miss him.” Ophelia asked before she went into her own singing words again.

“Tomorrow is Saint Valentine's day.

All in the morning betime,

And I a maid at your window,
To be your Valentine.”

"Then up he rose, and donn'd his clothes,
And dupp'd the chamber-door;
Let in the maid, that out a maid
Never departed more."

 

 Ophelia went down on her haunches and clasped her hands over her face. It was all silent.

“Did…did Hamlet…” Gertrude tried to understand the words spoken by Ophelia. “Hamlet won’t. He is a gentleman in him. He won’t for he …once loved her.”

“Alas, the young have their bearing. It may be done for lust not to last but does virtue mean any more to them? Or was it only for us? They taketh what we hold …virtuous.”

“Don’t be, Gertrude. She may not be of the mind…” Claudius pushed the notion off Gertrude. It will only pain him more that he was her first, but she wedded the other, and yet he never ceases to knock on her chamber door.

“She…did she mean us…”Gertrude looked at Claudius. “He knew and told him, and him to tell her. Oh my God, I am shame. Who else may know?”

“Hush, my love. It’s the past. We are …” Claudius reached toward Gertrude. It was then Ophelia opened her eyes and looked at Gertrude. 

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