Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Coriolanus Act I Scene 1.1.1

Scene 1.1.1
The streets of Rome

The streets of Rome had not seen many faces on its curfew hours which the Senate House had seen to enforced. The Senate House was the governing body of Rome; a blend of Noble and the Commoners held the ranks of Consuls, although the former held more than half the seats. The Consuls from the Commoners were Commoners themselves but they were elected members from that community. They held a voice but not the majority power of votes. An impotent arm of the Senate House would deem befitting them, although their voters hold more numbers than the others. The minority of the other half was power influenced once elected. They had forgotten their vows during the campaign of garnering support but their fluent vocabulary of words made them ever forgiving to their voters. With the majority the Noble Consuls held sway over the edicts that were read in the Senate.

That was until the hunger needs of the Commoners overrode their forgiving nature. The latest declaration by the Senate House had caused the march of the Commoners to the Senate. They had massed up in numbers from the earlier selected few that led them on the streets. They had massed before the storehouse near the Senate but the armed convoy of tanks and troopers prevented them from looting it. Their plight was the price of the wheat which they had planted as workers and sold raw to the Consul owned corporation, before it sold at a premium back to the Commoners.

“We want our food back.” It was a standoff then.

A standoff of the mass against the regime of Rome.

“You all resolved rather to die than to famish?” The commoner was dressed in the dressing of a scholar; high collared knee length blue shades frock with vertical striped down the left side of the chest while his footwear wear of the wooden sandals with the throngs strapped to just below his knees. His hair style was short cropped with a blue red middle streak down the center. It was the insignia adopted by the academics. He was not a Senate candidate but a hungry man whose body nutrition had been hampered by the sudden increase of the price of wheat grains. The grains from within it will yield flour that will be used to make the food that he could consume. The price of that grains had increased making the portion of flour reduced thus stroking the anger in him. He started as one but the numbers soon grew to hundreds and then into thousands.

“First, you know Caius Marcius is chief enemy to the people?” The scholar spoke once again. The assembled before him 
roared out that they knew. A lady then stepped forth and addressed the assembled. She was of the health service provider with her white nursing frock seen beneath her short dark jacket. She raised her right arm which held the medical alert tag.

“Let us kill him, and we’ll have wheat at our own price. Isn’t a verdict?” The Health nurse was vocal to the assembled. They cried out their voice as one to have the killing done. Another dressed as the Service Personnel took the stage on the assembled beside the nurse. 

“Speak, Nurse.” The Service Personnel spoke out.

“We are all good citizen of Rome. We yield to their rules, but the authority acceded on our generosity. They think we are too petty in our demand. They hold over us the object of our misery which in inventory was in abundance. They took our sufferance as a gain to them.” The nurse glared to the assembled. Her expression was of anger. “Let us revenge this with our blasters les we get blasted. For the Roman Gods be our patrons, this is not a thirst for revenge, but a fulfillment for flour on the table.”

“Would you proceed especially against Caius Marcius?” The Service Personnel queried the nurse. He was not questioning the nurse on her line of work but Caius Marcius was hero then among the Romans. He was a fine officer of the Elite Troopers. He had fought off many invaders to Rome. Recently, he was recalled to duty for the new invasion by the Volsces. He had returned to be a Consul. He was the one who had said that the wheat belonged to the corporate owners. He defended the Nobles whom he was one of them.

“Against him first: he’s a very dog to the commonalty.” The Nurse proclaimed out her hatred. She had known of the so named Hero. She had nursed him during his last battle; wounds that he would had succumb if not for her meticulous cares. Once the man had recovered from his wounds, he made hell of her visits with his nobility attitude. Her earlier hero worshipping soon came to abrupt end then.  Her patience with him came to an end when he cursed at her for her standing in the social ranks. He was in the recovery tube and with a negligent flick of her finger she could have you into a deep sleep but the appearance of the medical officer. He had foreseen her intention and reminded her of the oath she took in her profession. He was from the nobility rank, but he had fought for his country. His deed that made her let the hero live to fight one more battle.

“Consider you what services he has done for his country?” Those words stung her in the mind. It was taunted by the Service personnel with contempt on his words.

“Very well.” The nurse sighed. “I could be content to give him good report for his bravery but that he pays himself with being proud of his nobility.”

“Nay, buts speak not maliciously.”

“I say unto you, what he had done famously not for his country. He did it partly also for his mother. He was proud of it.” The nurse mocked the hero in his character. During his sedation, he had called for his mother many times and once even held the nurse to cry on her bosom as if it was his mother.

It drew some laughter from the assembled.

“What he cannot help in his own you fashioned the vice on him.” The Service Personnel mocked at the nurse. He had wanted her to draw more on the hero’ arrogance, but she had changed the direction to the mother. He whispered to her to speak seriously or leave.

“If I must not, I need not be barren of accusations.” The nurse sensed the tone. “He was  ...”

It was then the shouts were heard in the back.

“What shouts are these?” The nurse shouted out. “Have the other side of the city also rise in rebellion?”

The assembled started to move forth but they found a person pushing through the middle to step in front of them.

                                                                                          

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