Monday, February 16, 2015

Coriolanus Ac1 Scene 1.1 Part 1

CORIOLANUS
TRAITOR OR A MISLED HERO
June 2014



The Original Tale
Coriolanus was a tragedy by William Shakespeare, believed to have been written between 1605 and 1608. The play is based on the life of the legendary Roman leader Caius Marcius Coriolanus. The tragedy is numbered as one of the last two tragedies written by Shakespeare along with Antony and Cleopatra. Coriolanus is the name given to a Roman general after his more than adequate military success against various uprisings challenging the government of Rome. Following this success, Coriolanus becomes active in politics and seeks political leadership. His temperament is unsuited for popular leadership and he is quickly deposed, whereupon he aligns himself to set matters straight according to his own will. The alliances he forged to accomplish his own will result in his ultimate downfall and death. Coriolanus as a tragedy by Shakespeare is normally not included in the canonical list of outstanding plays written by Shakespeare usually reserved for Othello, Macbeth, Hamlet, and King Lear. It is often staged in full theatre productions and has recently been featured as a full-length film under the same title with the leading role played by Ralph Fiennes.

Act 1
Scene 1.1
The City
Rome the name

Aye, I call thee by the name that you were known. You offered your back to many of my people to build their home. With your back, you offered us bountiful pasture with grown food. You also nurtured it with creatures of sort whose generations had laid their flesh for these homes. We ought to be grateful of your sacrifice, but we rake deep into your back to build more of our homes; bigger and higher with the stakes of foundation that skewered your flesh.
You did not flinch then.

Not only did we add out numbers but we also invaded our greed for more. I chose the words to lay down the term as flourish. Yes, we did flourish. Rome grew on your back. We filled the unoccupied and where it was occupied, we layered on more. Soon the Romans were not enough for their own needs. They invited in the outsiders to come and stayed in the city. The newcomers were welcomed with open arms, but they were reclassified within the social ranks. The true blooded Roman was given the elite rank of the Noble while the newcomers were accorded the status of Commoner. With that segregation of the ranks, the roles and responsibilities were also defined. The leaders were all Romans while the Commoners continued to be in servitude. It was fine during the better times; there was no need to question the ranks. It became the way of life in Rome. The Noble ruled while the Commoners performed.

Who was to complaint when the body was kept nourished.

The numbers grew with the commoners. They populate like sows and cower for more of the nourishment.
What could the Noble do to satisfy the wants of the Commoners?

The Noble created opportunity; opportunities which they could harnessed from the Commoners as cannon fodders. Even the most piety works were given to the Commoners. It was back to the labor workforce of the expanded Commoner. The expanding living workforce requires feeding and space. The Noble then expanded the boundary of Rome within a short time. What they could not yield then was raided.

Aye, in your name the Noble declared that Rome was to expand.

In your name, we invaded.

Your name was revered by all and fought for.

Were you grateful?

Nay! In the last five years, you have reversed the fortunes which we were blessed before. Instead of encouraging us, you undo our efforts. The back of yours yielded gangrene that poisoned the growth. Your breath exhumes toxic scent. You rebelled when you should be our ally.

Aye, Rome. Have you desert us at this crucial hour?

But why?

Your rebellion weakened us. Do you know then we were in turn invaded? The enemy found meat in your poison. They are coming for your back.

Do you hear me?

Your silence deafened me.

I plead for your reply.


Answer me, Romans. I am your master.  

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