Monday, March 10, 2025

A peek into my mind.... the new tale

 I duly apologize for the late postings. I was busy with many other matters and when I was not, I was typing...... not my letter of resignation... at my age, it does not work....I was swarm with ideas on my developing tale.

An excerpt here.

In Greek mythology, Prometheus is best known for defying the Olympian gods by taking fire from them and giving it to humanity in the form of technology, knowledge and, more generally, civilization. Others spoke of him of creation of humanity from clay. For his punishment of stealing fire, Prometheus was bound to a rock, and an eagle was sent to eat his liver (in ancient Greece, the liver was thought to be the seat of human emotions). His liver would then grow back overnight, only to be eaten again the next day in an ongoing cycle. Another myth was Prometheus establishes the form of animal sacrifice. To some, Prometheus became a figure who represented human striving in the quest for scientific knowledge, to the extent of unintended consequences. Mary Shelley gave alternate title of the Modern Prometheus to her novel Frankenstein (1818). 

Do vampires exist? Current findings or none, explained (not believed) that vampires do not exists. The myth of vampires was popular with the tale of Dracula, but history tells us that Vlad Dracula may had induced in bloody executions, but there was no evidence that he drank blood. They may be some who may have ingested human blood as part of the ritual that they are feeding off the energy or soul of their enemy. There again, unproven but the myth remains there.

The key words to me are knowledge; fire yet HELL was abounded with it, and blood; made inside as the vitality of life. And fear; the boundary of our soul not to be crossed.

But there is also love; the unbound affection we showered out, and vengeance; the pain of ours displayed.

The creation; all of the above are ours.

Let me explore this to create my monster here.

Or that of another living soul that we deemed as a monster.

Deuteronomy 23:2 ESV; No one born of a forbidden union may enter the assembly of the Lord. Even to the tenth generation, none of his descendants may enter the assembly of the Lord.

 

This is a work of fiction. Unless otherwise indicated, all the names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents in this book are either the product of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.


Sound the klaxon now .......


1.

“What is a monster? The word monster may be used widely, literally, and in-depth as an entity that is huge, hideous, murderous, or threatening. In a closer view, an undesirable entity. Is a monster as depicted above truly the above? We have read descriptions of the above, but singular in context may not fill up all the definitions. A hideous figure may not be murderous unless provoked, and a huge entity may not be threatening. Or a threatening entity may not be hideous or huge.”

“And Frankie here is not a monster?” The drunken figure had his left arm over my left shoulder. “Och, he is just Frankie the monster.”

“Come on, William.” Frankie, or his full family name, Frankenstein, Victor Frankenstein, leaned forth to avoid the arm grabbing his neck. “And William, do not …”

William is the elder brother of Victor ‘Frankie’ Frankenstein.

“The recalcitrant serpent tangled its body over the neck.” William Frankenstein wormed his body at Frankie, with both arms then encircling the other.

“Frankie will be dead soon.” William laughed. He studied biology, majoring in serpents, at the university. The elder brother mimics the strangulation of the serpent at his brother. Victor tried to pull away, but William was also the university star at bodybuilding.

“Give him a break, William.” That was Justine Moritz, the co-student with Victor at the Department of Science. They were both doing postgraduate studies in advanced biology. They were in the group doing studies on re-engineering the workings of the nerves in the severed limbs.

“Oh, okay. I think I got his neck severed. Justine, do the honour of suturing the nerves. I think he is going to go into a zombie manifestation.” William released his brother and took his seat across from the former. He then had his arms around his friend, Elizabeth ‘Liz’ Muriel.

“Here …. Oops, I forgot our drinks. I knew….” William got up again and staggered towards the bar once more.

“He is such …” Liz sighed. She wondered why she put up with that drunken fool.

“A drunk?” Justine was not one to munch on niceties. “Ever since I knew him, he was and will be. He may be the star of the Uni at the spots, but he is a dumb when it comes to the social circles.”

“His pick-up lines are Hi, I am William. Want to peek at my Winkle? He made the name such a bore. If I am to wank his Winkle, I will have it attached to the rubber hose and pour acid there. That will give him the needed feel.” Justine was plain in her words.

“Be nice, Justine.” Victor looked at the lady.

“I can understand.” Elizabeth laughed.

“And yet you put out with him.”: Justine looked at her best friend.

“Put out, I can attest to that. We have drinks and walks, but put in, may not be the current ‘événement de notre relation’ (event of our relationship in English).

“Je suis belge et je parle néerlandais, français et allemand. Je préfère largement l'anglais avec ces idiots. (I am Belgium, and speaks Dutch, French and German. I much prefer English when witth these idiots.)” Justine looked at the other lady. 

“Les idiots sont peut-être adorables, la plupart du temps. (Idiots, they can be but lovable ones most times.) Elizabeth smile at their switch of the language taken to add credits to their Uni requirements.

Je maîtrise également la langue française. (I am versed in French language too.)” Victor cut in. 

Another excerpt20.

“Carmilla, is that you?” Lauren sat up on the bedding and whispered. The chamber may be lighted or darkened but to her, it was all the same. Her sights were failing, and with her ailing condition, she was bed ridden most days or nights, it does not matter at all. She got her meals served; taken but not tasted …… “Father, it feeds me, but I am not a fussy person on food.”

Her father had returned, and visited her often. She assumed it was morning, for the heat of the sunlight was in her skin. She will sit up and greet him. A peck on the cheeks was his way of saying I love you. Funny, that was how her mother told her then.

“Your father is a busy man. He has one lover, but many loves for his men. He cares for them more than me. He gives them orders and then the handshakes, but I get the kiss on the cheek and the hugs.”

“Are you here?” Lauren asked.

“Yes, I am. I am seated by the chair next to you.” The other lady, Carmilla replied.

“I can hear you. I ……” Lauren smiled.

“Can I sleep next you?” Carmilla asked. Lauren nodded. Carmilla climbed on the bedding and snuggled next to her.

“You are cold.” Lauren snuggled close to the other. She was comfortable with the other person; the last person who slept next to her was her mother. Father will not do so, but held her hands.

Lauren felt Carmilla’s left hand touched her bosom. She had felt uncomfortable initially, but gotten used to that. It was Carmilla’s request.

“I want to feel your heartbeats.” Carmilla told her.


The new tale is an adaption / re-write /  blend of FRANKENSTEIN and CARMILLA. It will be (still writing at it) a tale of EROTIC HORROR, and only for ADULTS please (rated SX18) or non-allowed PG. I will be honest to say that what started off as a trivial reading on the Internet (it was a boring evening, and the gals were behind closed curtains ) struck me initially as a new read and then got intri-fucking news (pardon the pun here.) and I begin on the 25th March, and now at 40K words and each page stirred up more than ...... excuse me..... horrifying thoughts inside me. You may never look at FRANKIE as FREAKY or CARMILLA (please read the original tale; LGBT mid 1800's era.) as EERIE, I will do my best to make this one of my best. 

Till Sherlock gets laid, I am here.

Till then, let me freak out here. 


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A peek into my mind.... the new tale

  I duly apologize for the late postings. I was busy with many other matters and when I was not, I was typing...... not my letter of resigna...