Jimmy Loong
An attempt to adapt from the
classic
June 8th 2017
Characters
Emil: The
"Phantom of the Opera", also referred to as the "Angel of
Music" and the "Opera-Ghost." He tutors and eventually becomes
obsessed with Christine Daaé.
Christine Daaé: A
young soprano at the Paris Opera House with whom "The Phantom" falls
in love.
Vicomte Raoul de
Chagny: Christine's childhood friend and love interest.
Comte Phillipe de
Chagny: Raoul's older brother.
Armand Moncharmin
and Firmin Richard: The new managers of the opera house.
Madame Giry: Christine's
mother, the keeper.
Lenier; the janitor
at the Opera House
Debierne and Coligny:
The previous managers of the opera house.
Joseph Bouquet: The
chief scene-shifter.
Carlotta: A spoiled
prima donna; the lead soprano of the Paris Opera House.
Madame Valerian:
Christine's elderly guardian.
Jean Valerian;
Christine mentor.
The Book of Stars and Emerging ones
1.
The pudgy man who claimed to be a chef
from the finest restaurants had much to allay any listeners of his claim. He
had the looks of one with the rounded girth and the snarling expression but his
clothing betrayed him more for a butcher than the meat cuisine performer.
However he did held himself esteemed that he worked in a kitchen although it
was for an Opera House where his position was to watch over the pots. One of
his usual tasks was to take the leftovers in a huge pot to the disposal area.
It was called the pit.
The place was as mentioned before, but
during that period, leftover food was still essentially food for the ones who
needed to eat. However the pudgy man was a selfish bastard. He preferred to
cart them to the hidden residents that were termed as pestilence by the many
but to him they were the ones that liked his cooking.
“Here’s dinner. Eat well.” The pudgy man
had climbed down four levels of stairs to the sub-levels with each step taken
with great heaving given his health condition. The man poured the content into
the catacombs there which was part of the tunnels below the city. The rodents
came out by the dozens; they need not fear or required any invitation for that
level was their domain.
Well domain can be invaded.
The eyes pupils dilate in the dark but
the figure stayed in the shadows. It was not rushing out like the rodents but
it will wait for the intruder to leave. Patience was a virtue he did not
learned but from the beatings and humiliation. His retaliations will come in
more severe manner but it takes patience to wait it out. The pudgy man had
taken the last step and it was time to appear then. The rodents did not make
way for they have shared their spoils many times. The shadow moved and with it
a lean figure emerged. The shape rushed
forward in a crouch like position, and it bend down to grab the pieces to feed.
Food even on the unhygienic flooring would still get digested in the stomach,
and it may come out sooner with the waste. A rodent rushed for the same piece
reached by the figure but the later won. It was the odds of being smaller in
strength. The figure then munched on the won morsel before it hummed the lyrics
of ‘Faust’.
Le veau d’or est vainqueur des dieux! The calf of gold is the victor
over the gods!
Dans sa gloire dérisoire, In its
derisory (absurd) glory,
Dans sa gloire dérisoire, In its
derisory (absurd) glory,
Le monstre abject insulte aux cieux! The abject monster insults
heaven!
Il contemple, ô rage étrange! It contemplates, oh
weird frenzy
Libretto: Jules
Barbier
That was his moment of joy for the figure seated there on the flooring.
He took a breath besides consuming the daily food for the he could taste. Both
came with the residence benefits.
………
The man cursed at the pot he had carried from the lower basements. He
dreaded the works he does but it was paying for his room and food. The later
was aplenty and the reason was there then in front of him. He had stepped into
the world of the affluent living and there was the two happiest couple alive.
They were a couple for they had spent their last ten years there managing the
place and then having sold it was a relief for them.
“Monsieur Lenier, do you still have any of the lamb stew?” The one was
seated there on the left was a huge man short cropped and tight tweed suit was
who requested for extra helpings.
“Debienne, please stop. You already had four servings and the ….” The one
seated on the right protested on the request. He was named Coligny but everyone
called him Sir. He was after all the previous owners or would be when it hits
the stroke of midnight. The man was half the size of the other and his diet was
equally well matched but their dressing was matching which made them perfect
partners. The speculation on the couple came from that but they were none
matching on the marital level. They were just partners in the same investment.
Lenier placed the pot into the cleaning area. His work area was a
combination of a kitchen, cleaning and dining which the duo loved to sit at on
the small table. They could afford a huge opera house but they had to save on a
proper dining area. He squeezed his way past the two seated figures to check on
the other pot still on the stove. The fire was turned off there but the food
was still warm. There was not much there but it was reserved for him. He had
saved it for someone else.
“Lenier, I asked you…” Debienne voiced out again while he glared at his
partner.
“I heard you, Monsieur but there is none left.” Lenier turned to his yet
to former employer. “You might want to try the celery sticks. They are brought
fresh from the market.”
“Aha! I like that.” Coligny laughed out loud. “Mon dieu! I never felt so
much relieved now we will no longer be owners.”
“And the eerie noises. I will miss those.” Debienne added on. “Whoooo… I
loved those moments.”
“That’s enough, Sir.” The voice belonged to Madame Giry the dancer coach
and almost anything that needed mothering there. The lady with the perky nose
wore her rounded rimmed glasses perched there was a tall one with the hair
swept back into the bun at the top of the head, and dressed in the body fitting
blue dress and flat shoes. She strolled over as if she was walking on air with
each step well placed and without a sound.
“The Phantom cannot be mocked, Sir. Not so when you are no more its
patron of the Opera House.” Madame Giry was never one to hide her remarks be it
good or bad. She had served the one other owner besides these two, and her
position in the House was explicitly spelled as ‘must have’ in nicer terms or
obstinate in cruder form.
“Humph!” Debienne mocked back but the other kinder partner offered the
apology.
“We shall be gone soon. All the best to your new benefactor.” Coligny
wished upon the lady. He then sighed and looked at the place he had spent over
ten years. It was ten good solid years to keep the Opera House alive. He was
given a heritage of the City and was advised then by the Maire of Paris.
“Next to the Eiffel Tower, the Opera House is one of its wonders here in
Paris. It’s a symbol of culture and tradition like the Notre Dama Cathedral,
the Lourve or the Sacre Couer Basilica.” The Maire of Paris then heaved in some
air into his empty lungs before he continued on. “It had housed the greats of
Wagner… Siegfried… Carme…the L’etoile and many others. It must …”
Coligny kept the music and audience coming to the place. He had seen
Faust, Manon by Massenets, and even the Queen of Spades by Tchaikovsky. Alas,
there were great performance but the city have its other splendour which have
taken over the attention to the House. The revenues were still there, but the
call to pull the curtain on the owners was due. It was age and health that
veiled their minds for some months. Debienne had developed some health issues
and his call to ret in the country side was recommended. The man denied it but
the call was made by Coligny.
“Madame Giry, we are leaving now.”
2.
For someone not familiar with the back stages of the House they would
not have known Madame Giry. The lady sat herself by the table while Lenier
served her the last of the stews. It was not a great meal but it was better
than the one she would have done. It was
not easy to be a lady who held many roles including coaching a group of twenty
five dancers then and managing a daughter who never knew her father.
“Your meal, madame.” Lenier took pride in his serving then, and more so
for the lady he had taken an interest from afar. “I added in a slice of bread.”
The lady looked at the meal served and frowned at the bread. The bread
was essential for her wellbeing but she had taught many of her students to
watch their weight with starchy food like bread. She had maintained her frame
from her earlier days as a ballerina with her strict diet. Those were the days
of her life when her dance movements held her attractions to the audience. She
was named the Graceful Stork, more so for her perky nose which many had
compared to that bird species. Or by her envious peers as the Graceful Pelican.
She was ever conscious of her body frame and practised hard to maintain it.
Her glamour drove many of the men to knock on her dressing door with
gifts and accolades. There were offers too to be swept off her feet and be a
companion of these men but her beauty attracted all ages. She was then not keen
to be with any of them but for a young man with the brigade colours on his
shoulder lapels. His appearance to her then was to sing the chorus from Carmen.
Avec
la garde montante,
nous arrivons, nous voilà.
Sonne, trompette éclatante !
Taratata, taratata !
Nous marchons la tête haute
comme de petits soldats,
marquant sans faire de faute,
une, deux, marquant le pas.
Les épaules en arrière
et la poitrine en dehors,
les bras de cette manière
tombant tout le long du corps.
Avec la garde montante, etc.
nous arrivons, nous voilà.
Sonne, trompette éclatante !
Taratata, taratata !
Nous marchons la tête haute
comme de petits soldats,
marquant sans faire de faute,
une, deux, marquant le pas.
Les épaules en arrière
et la poitrine en dehors,
les bras de cette manière
tombant tout le long du corps.
Avec la garde montante, etc.
The lady had then been
taken aback by the uniformed officer giving her a sing of the lyrics from
Carmen. She did not know why then but her feet moved to his singing and soon
they were dancing on the cobble stones on the street of Paris. It was like it
then whenever he arrived to see her. He was a fine gentleman waiting in line
for the other admirers to take their turns with her and be spurned later before
he emerged holding the flower and humming a song.
“My lady, you complete my love for music. That one held half my heart
while your beauty occupied my other half and all other parts of my body.” Those
were sweet words from the man whom she later named her hero of her life then.
He held no great wealth or fame but the patience to walk with her along the
dark streets offering his gallantry to protect her from any harm. His visits
were many when he was in Paris but the calling of a commissioned officer also
entailed him been away for weeks. The courtship went on for two years before he
asked her to wait for him. She did and it was another two years before he
offered her the ring to be his companion as Madame Giry.
So the dancer became Madame Giry.
Major Fabian Daae Giry of the French Dragoon. She moved into his home; a
small apartment in the suburbs where they planned their family. Her dancing
performance had taken a break soon after her marriage. It’s sad world in the
celebrity world when your fame was only as good as your appearance. The prints
had one stage featured her not of her dance but her disappearance from the
stage. The prints were speculative and even rumoured that she had lost her
footing. Soon her absence made her incognito to the world but she had no
regrets then for love was engulfing her.
It matter not to her then for she was contented with her life. She soon
told him of the good news. She was with his child but it carried him sadness
that he was to join in a campaign at the borders.
L’amour! L’amour! L’amour! L’amour!
L’amour est enfant de Bohême,
Il n’a jamais jamais connu de loi.
Si tou ne m’aimes pas, je t’aime.
Si je t’aime, prends garde à toi!
Il n’a jamais jamais connu de loi.
Si tou ne m’aimes pas, je t’aime.
Si je t’aime, prends garde à toi!
It was her declaration of her love to him. The love was strong but the
lover had to leave that evening for his brigade. He did with a heavy heart
while she bid him farewell with a swollen frame. The hard labours that came with
the birth of their child was borne with love but the news came soon to shatter
it.
“Major Giry had succumbed to his wounds in the battle.”
A lady without her companion and a child without a father then found it hard
to live in Paris. The mother of the child without any relatives then soon found
the pension and wealth of her husband may sustain her life but it was not to
bring happiness.
She named the child; Christine Daaé.
It broke her when the child asked her of the never seen father. The
young widow was met by other suitors then but she could not bear the idea of loving
another man. It took her another two years to realise her true happiness was on
the stage when she was performing. With that, she took her life back to the
stage but the stage was not ready to accept her then.
“My dear Stork, you are …how may I put it…too much weight.” It was the
message that she had to earn her place to be on the stage. She tried but the
weight on the legs will not work for her like before. She tried harder but it
won’t work so she was offered another task.
She could work there as the assistant to the Coach. It was the next best
thing. She began teaching the younger dancers.
She will create a new Dancing Stork.
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