Sunday, November 5, 2017

The OPERA HOUSE Part 3 & 4

3.

Christine Daaé leaned her weight on her left leg before she raised her right leg without bending it to level with her hips. There she stopped and then arched her back to raise her leg higher till it touched her forehead. She held it there with her mind focused on maintaining her balance. She then slowly lowered her leg and feeling the blood circulating there into her legs once more.

“Your posture is good but your movement are too …rigid.” Christine looked to the lady who was her coach and mother. She closed her eyes on that but her mind perked up when she heard the pianist played the tune from Faust. Her grievances were forgotten and she was into her Marguerite alter ego character from Faust. 

“Christine, do it once more but relaxed your muscles.” The younger lady heard her mother and the dancer went back to her routine. Her move was then told off by the older lady and Christine then snapped back.

“Mother…Why …”

“Mother? Its Madame Giry to you like all the others. Go back to your lessons.” Christine stopped her tantrums and resumed her lessons. It was always the same for her mother; her daughter was to be better. It mattered not for the others.
“They are not Daaé.” That was the simple answer given by her mother.

It was easy being the daughter of Major Fabian Daae Giry of the French Dragoon but not that of Madame Giry. She recalled from the age of three she was coached in the dance lessons.

“Mama, I can’t.” Christine then screamed out when she was forced to do the split. She cried out louder when her mother then insisted that she do it or there would be no supper. It drove the neighbour over but her mother shooed them away. She went through all that in the evening when her mother was back from work till the hour to sleep. One night she cowered in the corner and bawled her voice out. It was so loud that it made her mother sat up to look at her.

“Christine, I know you are hurt but darling, that is price we pay for fame. You have to be better than me to outlast the others.” Her mother saw in front of her with the pleading eyes. “I was there but I gave it up for you. I gave birth to you and lost my …postures.”

stand it all then but the tears on her mother’s cheeks told her that she had to please her mother. She hugged her mother then and continued her lessons. After all, there was no one else besides Mama in her life then. She did her first performance for her mother at the age of six and it was from there, more lessons before she joined the Opera House as the apprentice at twelve.

There she met the man known as Lenier. He was always Lenier and never Uncle or any last names. The man was the one who took the mother and girl to their new accommodation.

“It’s not much but it’s comfortable and warm during the colder nights.” Lenier patted the heater on the wall by the window. “I changed the mattress for a newer one but we have not the money to buy one so I took it from the Coligny’s bed. He won’t notice the difference for he seldom lie on it.”

Lenier indicated to the two beds that he had arranged there. They were identical in design but the one by the window was with a floral bed covers. Christine recalled jumping onto the floral bed cover mattress and laughed. It was softer than her old one. It was not that they could not afford one but not the softness there.

“From here, you can see the circus there. I can bring you there if you want.” Lenier looked to the lady but she declined him casually.

“Well, that’s all then.” Lenier then took leave of the mother and child who had then leaned out to see the circus even though it was close. Lenier did not see the young girl turned to see him. She was smiling then.

It was the first man in her life that shown her kindness.

The second one was the pianist.

Jean Valerian the elderly man whose fingers could bring out the beautiful music from the ivory keys on the piano. He taught her the lyrics of Carmen then with Christine seated next to him on the piano seat.

Car tu n'avais eu qu'à paraître,
Qu'a jeter un regard sur moin
Pour t'emperer de tout mon être,
Ô ma Carmen!
Et j'étais une chose à toi
Carmen, je t'aime!

“Try that , my dear.” The pianist hummed the tune to the Christine then at fourteen of age. It was her break from the dance routine then of the Swan Lake. She rushed to the pianist who was ever willing to play some chords for her. He had heard her scream a year ago when she fell on her routine and hurt her left heel. She screamed out loud on the pain then at her mother.

“Mother, I am in pain. I need to rest.” The tone of her voice and the resonance it emit caught his attention. He has a keen ear for voice as Madame Giry was good at picking the dancers. The pianist had taken the girl to the side and applied ointment for her.

“Monsieur Valerian, I will take care of her.” The mother had come to retrieve her daughter. It may be a personal fear of her of a man may be molesting her. She was however assured when another lady approached her daughter.

“Madame Giry, I will take care of her.” The other elderly slapped at the pianist’s hand then took over the task. Christine soon took her rest next to the pianist. The Carmen was played out with his fingers with every tap delicate to the spring below the key to vibrate the strings beneath the cover and the tune came out with its sweet melody.

“Christine, you are a good dancer but your true talent are in your voice. You could sing.” The pianist then asked her to sing the basic vowels AEIOU. It came out beautifully but Christine was not able to continue on then for she was asked to resume her dancing lesson. Madame Giry had then turned to whisper to the pianist.

“Never intrude in my dancers.”

It was not for another month before Christine was to hear the conversation of her singing lessons. She was seated with her mother at the table having their evening meal when the elderly lady joined them.

“Madame Valerian, I did not invite you.” Madame Giry glared at the other. “I am the one who trained the sopranos. And your role was for the dancer. We can share her talents. If she failed as a dancer, she could be a soprano.”

“Do we agree?” Madame Valerian asked.

“She is my daughter. I will train her…”

 “And I will sponsor her training as well.” Madame Valerian handed over the purse. “I am doing it because she holds a talent inside her. With this, she may be the next soprano that will bring the audience to their feet.”

“She is not to be sold.” Madame Giry made her point to the other. So that ended the first bout between the two over Christine.




4.

“She is an angel ….No, she is the angel for the role.” Madame Valerian sat herself on the dining table after having served the dinner spread for her husband, he pianist. “If only Margot was around, she may surpass ….No, she may not. I know…”

“And dinner is getting cold.” The man across the table spoke up. He was not a man of many words for his voice was the piano music that he tap with the ivory keys like his teeth. “And you ought to eat first.”

“Eat? Is that all you hold in compassion for missing Margot?” Lady Valerian was upset then. “Margot is our daughter.”

“And she is missing.” The man slumped in his frame while he lowered the fork he was holding. “The war is a sad event and people get…”

“Margot is not dead. She is only missing.” Lady Valerian recalled the day they had to leave their home for the borders of France. It was the year of 1876, when the Montenegrin declaring war on the Ottoman Empire. The Valerian then a middle aged couple had migrated from the southern part of the continent to Montenegro playing their trade as pianist and soprano to the elites there. They had moved there when the music scene there accepted the beauty of the operas. It was great for some years and then the war came. It was then to flee for freedom from tyranny. They took their valued daughter Margot then a young soprano who had yet to find her place on the stage. Their fled to freedom was running with the others in the same predicament but not all of them shared the same trauma like the Valerian.

“Margot missing!” The wife called him. “She was next to me.”

The man stood up from his rest by the tree. They were in the woods with five families trying to found the shortest way across. The lady went frantic and started calling the name loud until she was told to quiet down by the others.

“Your shouts may bring the soldiers.” It shut her up but not her search. The couple split up to find their daughter. She was not seen but the soldiers saw them. They came rushing towards the man and he fled with the bullets whizzing past him. The man jumped the obstacles and finally found cover to evade his pursuers. He then found then in his run he had forgotten his love.

His only love left then in his life..

He went looking for her. He did not find her until the next day break hiding in a fox hole. She did not dug in but tried to burrow there. He pulled her out and then held her close.

“My love, we will not be apart again. We will flee together and if it happened die together.” That vow carried them across the borders and then to a new life where he plays with his fingers and she coached with her voice but every moment, they have in their mind was their daughter, Margot.

“Old man! Are you deaf? I want to coach Christine. She is a gem.”

“Madame Giry won’t approve.” The man replied. “Can we go back to our dinner?”

The dinner went on like many to others to be repeated every day and so was the lady  her insistent with Madame Giry. She did it until Madame Giry loathed the conversation.

“Madame Valerian, I do appreciate your … generosity but Christine is my daughter. She may not be what you want.”

“Madame, from one mother to another. Do we not treasure our only child? It’s from our body that the child came to this world.” Madame Griy gripped her hands together in prayer. “We did it out of love. And our love extent to giving them the best. You are doing your best to make her the best. I am also trying to do that.”

“You are not her mother.” Madame Giry laid out in simple words.

“Yes, I am not but I would like to be her Guardian. I like to be a part of her life.” Madame Valerian made it simpler.”

The process to be a Guardian was simple; you shake your hand and kiss the child. One day, Madame Valerian for her wish and it was that momentous day, the piano played this tune.

LA MUSICA

Dal mio Permesso amato a voi ne vegno,
incliti eroi, sangue gentil de' regi,
Di cui narra la fama eccelsi pregi,
Né giunge al ver, perch'è tropp'alto il segno.

Io la Musica son, ch'ai dolci accenti
So far tranquillo ogni turbato core,
Et or di nobil ira et or d'amore
Poss'infiammar le più gelate menti.

Io su cetera d'or cantando soglio
Mortal orecchio lusingar talora;
E in questa guisa all'armonia sonora
Della lira del ciel più l'alme invoglio.

Quinci a dirvi d'Orfeo desio mi sprona,
D'Orfeo che trasse al suo cantar le fere,
E servo fé l'Inferno a sue preghiere,
Gloria immortal di Pindo e d'Elicona.

Or mentre i canti alterno, or lieti or mesti,
Non si mova augellin fra queste piante,
Ne s'oda in queste rive onda sonante,
Et ogni auretta in suo cammin s'arresti.


Claudio Monteverdi Mantua, Italy, c1607 L' Orfeo Libretto
Music
From my beloved Permessus I come to you,
illustrious heroes, noble scions of kings,
whose glorious deeds Fame relates,
though falling short of the truth, since the target is too high.

I am Music, who in sweet accents
can calm each troubled heart,
and now with noble anger, now with love,
can kindle the most frigid minds.

Singing to a golden lyre, I am wont
sometimes to charm mortal ears;
and in this way inspire souls with a longing
for the sonorous harmony of heaven's lyre.

Hence desire spurs me to tell you of Orpheus,
the immortal glory of Pindus and Helicon,
Orpheus who drew wild beasts to him by his singing,
and who subjugated Hades by his entreaties.

Now while I alternate my songs, now happy, now sad,
let no small bird stir among these trees,
no noisy wave be heard on these river?banks,
and let each little breeze halt in its course.

Like the first opera pieces to be enjoyed then, Christine found acceptance in her life then. She was fifteen then.  It was not her only joy then.


Thursday, November 2, 2017

The OPERA HOUSE part 1 and 2


Jimmy Loong
An attempt to adapt from the classic
June 8th 2017






Characters
Emil: The "Phantom of the Opera", also referred to as the "Angel of Music" and the "Opera-Ghost." He tutors and eventually becomes obsessed with Christine Daaé.
Christine Daaé: A young soprano at the Paris Opera House with whom "The Phantom" falls in love.
Vicomte Raoul de Chagny: Christine's childhood friend and love interest.
Comte Phillipe de Chagny: Raoul's older brother.
Armand Moncharmin and Firmin Richard: The new managers of the opera house.
Madame Giry: Christine's mother, the keeper.
Lenier; the janitor at the Opera House
Debierne and Coligny: The previous managers of the opera house.
Joseph Bouquet: The chief scene-shifter.
Carlotta: A spoiled prima donna; the lead soprano of the Paris Opera House.
Madame Valerian: Christine's elderly guardian.
Jean Valerian; Christine mentor.



The Book of Stars and Emerging ones

1.
The pudgy man who claimed to be a chef from the finest restaurants had much to allay any listeners of his claim. He had the looks of one with the rounded girth and the snarling expression but his clothing betrayed him more for a butcher than the meat cuisine performer. However he did held himself esteemed that he worked in a kitchen although it was for an Opera House where his position was to watch over the pots. One of his usual tasks was to take the leftovers in a huge pot to the disposal area.

It was called the pit.

The place was as mentioned before, but during that period, leftover food was still essentially food for the ones who needed to eat. However the pudgy man was a selfish bastard. He preferred to cart them to the hidden residents that were termed as pestilence by the many but to him they were the ones that liked his cooking.

“Here’s dinner. Eat well.” The pudgy man had climbed down four levels of stairs to the sub-levels with each step taken with great heaving given his health condition. The man poured the content into the catacombs there which was part of the tunnels below the city. The rodents came out by the dozens; they need not fear or required any invitation for that level was their domain.

Well domain can be invaded.

The eyes pupils dilate in the dark but the figure stayed in the shadows. It was not rushing out like the rodents but it will wait for the intruder to leave. Patience was a virtue he did not learned but from the beatings and humiliation. His retaliations will come in more severe manner but it takes patience to wait it out. The pudgy man had taken the last step and it was time to appear then. The rodents did not make way for they have shared their spoils many times. The shadow moved and with it a lean figure emerged.  The shape rushed forward in a crouch like position, and it bend down to grab the pieces to feed. Food even on the unhygienic flooring would still get digested in the stomach, and it may come out sooner with the waste. A rodent rushed for the same piece reached by the figure but the later won. It was the odds of being smaller in strength. The figure then munched on the won morsel before it hummed the lyrics of ‘Faust’.

Le veau d’or est vainqueur des dieux!              The calf of gold is the victor over the gods!
Dans sa gloire dérisoire,                                     In its derisory (absurd) glory,       
Dans sa gloire dérisoire,                                     In its derisory (absurd) glory,       
Le monstre abject insulte aux cieux!                The abject monster insults heaven!
Il contemple, ô rage étrange!                             It contemplates, oh weird frenzy
Act II of the French opera Faust by Charles-François Gounod
Libretto: Jules Barbier

That was his moment of joy for the figure seated there on the flooring. He took a breath besides consuming the daily food for the he could taste. Both came with the residence benefits.
………
The man cursed at the pot he had carried from the lower basements. He dreaded the works he does but it was paying for his room and food. The later was aplenty and the reason was there then in front of him. He had stepped into the world of the affluent living and there was the two happiest couple alive. They were a couple for they had spent their last ten years there managing the place and then having sold it was a relief for them.

“Monsieur Lenier, do you still have any of the lamb stew?” The one was seated there on the left was a huge man short cropped and tight tweed suit was who requested for extra helpings.

Debienne, please stop. You already had four servings and the ….” The one seated on the right protested on the request. He was named Coligny but everyone called him Sir. He was after all the previous owners or would be when it hits the stroke of midnight. The man was half the size of the other and his diet was equally well matched but their dressing was matching which made them perfect partners. The speculation on the couple came from that but they were none matching on the marital level. They were just partners in the same investment.

Lenier placed the pot into the cleaning area. His work area was a combination of a kitchen, cleaning and dining which the duo loved to sit at on the small table. They could afford a huge opera house but they had to save on a proper dining area. He squeezed his way past the two seated figures to check on the other pot still on the stove. The fire was turned off there but the food was still warm. There was not much there but it was reserved for him. He had saved it for someone else.

“Lenier, I asked you…” Debienne voiced out again while he glared at his partner.

“I heard you, Monsieur but there is none left.” Lenier turned to his yet to former employer. “You might want to try the celery sticks. They are brought fresh from the market.”

“Aha! I like that.” Coligny laughed out loud. “Mon dieu! I never felt so much relieved now we will no longer be owners.”
“And the eerie noises. I will miss those.” Debienne added on. “Whoooo… I loved those moments.”

“That’s enough, Sir.” The voice belonged to Madame Giry the dancer coach and almost anything that needed mothering there. The lady with the perky nose wore her rounded rimmed glasses perched there was a tall one with the hair swept back into the bun at the top of the head, and dressed in the body fitting blue dress and flat shoes. She strolled over as if she was walking on air with each step well placed and without a sound.

“The Phantom cannot be mocked, Sir. Not so when you are no more its patron of the Opera House.” Madame Giry was never one to hide her remarks be it good or bad. She had served the one other owner besides these two, and her position in the House was explicitly spelled as ‘must have’ in nicer terms or obstinate in cruder form.

“Humph!” Debienne mocked back but the other kinder partner offered the apology.

“We shall be gone soon. All the best to your new benefactor.” Coligny wished upon the lady. He then sighed and looked at the place he had spent over ten years. It was ten good solid years to keep the Opera House alive. He was given a heritage of the City and was advised then by the Maire of Paris.

“Next to the Eiffel Tower, the Opera House is one of its wonders here in Paris. It’s a symbol of culture and tradition like the Notre Dama Cathedral, the Lourve or the Sacre Couer Basilica.” The Maire of Paris then heaved in some air into his empty lungs before he continued on. “It had housed the greats of Wagner… Siegfried… Carme…the L’etoile and many others. It must …”

Coligny kept the music and audience coming to the place. He had seen Faust, Manon by Massenets, and even the Queen of Spades by Tchaikovsky. Alas, there were great performance but the city have its other splendour which have taken over the attention to the House. The revenues were still there, but the call to pull the curtain on the owners was due. It was age and health that veiled their minds for some months. Debienne had developed some health issues and his call to ret in the country side was recommended. The man denied it but the call was made by Coligny.

“Madame Giry, we are leaving now.”



2.
For someone not familiar with the back stages of the House they would not have known Madame Giry. The lady sat herself by the table while Lenier served her the last of the stews. It was not a great meal but it was better than the one she would have done.  It was not easy to be a lady who held many roles including coaching a group of twenty five dancers then and managing a daughter who never knew her father.

“Your meal, madame.” Lenier took pride in his serving then, and more so for the lady he had taken an interest from afar. “I added in a slice of bread.”

The lady looked at the meal served and frowned at the bread. The bread was essential for her wellbeing but she had taught many of her students to watch their weight with starchy food like bread. She had maintained her frame from her earlier days as a ballerina with her strict diet. Those were the days of her life when her dance movements held her attractions to the audience. She was named the Graceful Stork, more so for her perky nose which many had compared to that bird species. Or by her envious peers as the Graceful Pelican. She was ever conscious of her body frame and practised hard to maintain it.

Her glamour drove many of the men to knock on her dressing door with gifts and accolades. There were offers too to be swept off her feet and be a companion of these men but her beauty attracted all ages. She was then not keen to be with any of them but for a young man with the brigade colours on his shoulder lapels. His appearance to her then was to sing the chorus from Carmen.

Avec la garde montante,
nous arrivons, nous voilà.
Sonne, trompette éclatante !
Taratata, taratata !
Nous marchons la tête haute
comme de petits soldats,
marquant sans faire de faute,
une, deux, marquant le pas.
Les épaules en arrière
et la poitrine en dehors,
les bras de cette manière
tombant tout le long du corps.
Avec la garde montante, etc.

The lady had then been taken aback by the uniformed officer giving her a sing of the lyrics from Carmen. She did not know why then but her feet moved to his singing and soon they were dancing on the cobble stones on the street of Paris. It was like it then whenever he arrived to see her. He was a fine gentleman waiting in line for the other admirers to take their turns with her and be spurned later before he emerged holding the flower and humming a song.

“My lady, you complete my love for music. That one held half my heart while your beauty occupied my other half and all other parts of my body.” Those were sweet words from the man whom she later named her hero of her life then. He held no great wealth or fame but the patience to walk with her along the dark streets offering his gallantry to protect her from any harm. His visits were many when he was in Paris but the calling of a commissioned officer also entailed him been away for weeks. The courtship went on for two years before he asked her to wait for him. She did and it was another two years before he offered her the ring to be his companion as Madame Giry.

So the dancer became Madame Giry.

Major Fabian Daae Giry of the French Dragoon. She moved into his home; a small apartment in the suburbs where they planned their family. Her dancing performance had taken a break soon after her marriage. It’s sad world in the celebrity world when your fame was only as good as your appearance. The prints had one stage featured her not of her dance but her disappearance from the stage. The prints were speculative and even rumoured that she had lost her footing. Soon her absence made her incognito to the world but she had no regrets then for love was engulfing her.

It matter not to her then for she was contented with her life. She soon told him of the good news. She was with his child but it carried him sadness that he was to join in a campaign at the borders.

L’amour! L’amour! L’amour! L’amour!
L’amour est enfant de Bohême,
Il n’a jamais jamais connu de loi.
Si tou ne m’aimes pas, je t’aime.
Si je t’aime, prends garde à toi!

It was her declaration of her love to him. The love was strong but the lover had to leave that evening for his brigade. He did with a heavy heart while she bid him farewell with a swollen frame. The hard labours that came with the birth of their child was borne with love but the news came soon to shatter it.

“Major Giry had succumbed to his wounds in the battle.”

A lady without her companion and a child without a father then found it hard to live in Paris. The mother of the child without any relatives then soon found the pension and wealth of her husband may sustain her life but it was not to bring happiness.

She named the child; Christine Daaé.

It broke her when the child asked her of the never seen father. The young widow was met by other suitors then but she could not bear the idea of loving another man. It took her another two years to realise her true happiness was on the stage when she was performing. With that, she took her life back to the stage but the stage was not ready to accept her then.
“My dear Stork, you are …how may I put it…too much weight.” It was the message that she had to earn her place to be on the stage. She tried but the weight on the legs will not work for her like before. She tried harder but it won’t work so she was offered another task.

She could work there as the assistant to the Coach. It was the next best thing. She began teaching the younger dancers.

She will create a new Dancing Stork.


Tweet....tweet.... I am back.... 2/11/2017

Happy Halloween....

Oops! Belated one though. Some one clasped the lock on the casket and slung the DOD sign on it hence I had one extra night sleep undisturbed.

Darn! I missed the treats and tricks.

But here I am now. Back at my favorite page. So where shall we begin.

First the treat.

I have almost penned the tale which I am about to post. Its called the HOUSE. Or to be exact the OPERA HOUSE.

Actually, I got the idea some nights back when the winds were howling and the four legged were moaning ( don't get me wrong here.... it was no doggy then. ), and I had to read something to sleep. Yes the noises were troubling me. And the book I reached for beneath my chair was ....not the PANT LOOSE one but the Phantom of the Opera. And it was not even Halloween then. Or ELVIRA the witch will be seated next to me.... or was it.....never mind. So I took to reading it, and then the inspiration.

But I could not write another version, or a sequel ( it did cross my mind then...making it more appealing then just running in the sewers ) so I decided to re-write it on a different plateau.

Hence at the closing chapters now at 44K words  ( I know I made a promise not to publish unfinished tale but I will make an exception here for HALLOWEEN.... ). I will complete the final chapters this weekend.

Now the trick.

I must add this into the blog, It was sent to me by WHATAPPS and I am reproducing the bits of it....the juicy ones. It's titled the PENIS AND ITS WONDERS

The message said it was WORLD PENIS DAY.

( No offence ladies. We do have to stand up to our own. )

For one, the PENIS is a true friend. He ( I am calling it a HIM and not... ) stands up in times of need.  He is a genuine friend like a bra, she supports you and he does that to us. His faithful friend the condom, protects us from harm ( sexual harassment...). He holds a high respect for a mutual friend, the vagina. She accommodates him well despite his dimensions.

Once a diet expert told me, the PENIS is like alike Breakfast. It has a mushroom head, a sausage body, two eggs and galore of milk inside. It can made the lady full for nine months besides its good manners.
 1. It STAND before it performs
2. Its EMOTIONAL; its weeps on performance
3. Its POLITE for it bows on the end of performance.

That's the trick for you this HALLOWEEN

Wait for Part 2 next week on more PENIS-ULA jokes


Soon I will be back.....

 I have been penning away for the last weeks, slowly; I had to put aside my other concerns to go here. But as was once mentioned to me, all ...